Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the picture. It matches with what the picture says: "unicorns."

It is wonderful to hear: "Small girls with big dreams, swirling thoughts, Traverse glittered pathways toward blank paged books." I agree youth should have big dreams. Dream of anything they like.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks for reading my poem and for your thoughtful comments. I wish I could hop on a unicorn about now and head on off on a glitter path to find a rainbow. :-) Hugs.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a very inviting offering for this contest!! ;) Love the reference to the unicorns of the poet's imagination -- well done! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thank you. I appreciate your kindness. Hugs.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer!
What a beautiful and creative rictameter presentation! What is there about unicorns, rainbows, and little girls? They surely go hand in hand with one another - or at least they did when my daughter was a little girl.
Thank you for sharing!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021

Thank you for your review and comment for my poem. I'm not sure, but I think it's the magic. Hugs.