House Sold
Just what the investor was looking for apparently...50 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz1
This so describes the real estates wins and losses here in the New Orleans area where change keeps coming like hurricanes in an active season. To add to the mix some cash buyer shows up, bids over asking price. Seller takes money. Be out by next Friday. Then what you bid on is tied up in tangles. I hope I can share it on my friend's time-line.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This so describes the real estates wins and losses here in the New Orleans area where change keeps coming like hurricanes in an active season. To add to the mix some cash buyer shows up, bids over asking price. Seller takes money. Be out by next Friday. Then what you bid on is tied up in tangles. I hope I can share it on my friend's time-line.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Hey - New Orleans... my place of origin (wink, wink!)! ;) But, look at the variations this way: you definitely never get bored, yeah? ;) I certainly had fun with this one, Jean -- so glad that you did too! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from Erika Seshadri
That was hilarious!! I see it's done very well. Not surprising in the least. That was a fun read. I look forward to reading more of your work.
All the best.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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That was hilarious!! I see it's done very well. Not surprising in the least. That was a fun read. I look forward to reading more of your work.
All the best.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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LOL!! I certainly had fun with this one, Erika -- so glad that you did too! ;) :)Thanx for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from Tpa
A very fast pace story filled with laughter. Your uniqueness of blending the decor and setting of the house, plus there was that mystique throughout the story of how it ended. very good.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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A very fast pace story filled with laughter. Your uniqueness of blending the decor and setting of the house, plus there was that mystique throughout the story of how it ended. very good.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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LOL!! I certainly had fun with this one, TPA -- so glad that you did too! ;) :)Thanx for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from greyson ernst
congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! on your work being number one im honestly not to surprised you won my vote and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good day
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! on your work being number one im honestly not to surprised you won my vote and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good day
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Oh my goodness -- such awesome stars, Greyson: THANK YOU so much!! ;) If you must know, I certainly had fun with this one, sir -- so glad that you did too! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from kmoss
This is a funny dream come true. Lol. If only that could actually happen! I enjoyed your dialogue only entry. It was easy to read and it didn't get fighting between speakers. Nicely done. Congrats on placing in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This is a funny dream come true. Lol. If only that could actually happen! I enjoyed your dialogue only entry. It was easy to read and it didn't get fighting between speakers. Nicely done. Congrats on placing in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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LOL!! I certainly had fun with this one, K -- so glad that you did too! ;) :)Thanx for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
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Front porch-folio, love it!
Comment from Bill Schott
Such a great story that I'm sure we would all like to have happen to us. I guess I would have to pack the wife's clothes and tell her later.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Such a great story that I'm sure we would all like to have happen to us. I guess I would have to pack the wife's clothes and tell her later.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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LOL!! I certainly had fun with this one, Bill -- so glad that you did too! ;) :) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Fiction or not a fiction, it is a fun piece of Dialogue Only Writing and congratulate your getting the second place.
You have many dialogues that aren't finished because the other character cut in so it's more natural. I should try to do that.
Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Fiction or not a fiction, it is a fun piece of Dialogue Only Writing and congratulate your getting the second place.
You have many dialogues that aren't finished because the other character cut in so it's more natural. I should try to do that.
Well done.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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LOL!! I certainly had fun with this one, Lisa -- so glad that you did too! ;) :)Thanx for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from Earl Corp
I could actually picture this as a skit on the Carol Burnett Show with Tim Conway as the husband. This was a fun read and will be getting my vote. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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I could actually picture this as a skit on the Carol Burnett Show with Tim Conway as the husband. This was a fun read and will be getting my vote. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Oh my goodness yes!! Could you not just see Dick van Dyke as the real estate guy?!! Those stars are just wonderful!! ;) I certainly had fun with this one, Earl -- so glad that you did too! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is absolutely hilarious! I could see where it was going after the matter of price came up, but the poor husband really got blind-sighted! You've got a great imagination and sense of humour. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This is absolutely hilarious! I could see where it was going after the matter of price came up, but the poor husband really got blind-sighted! You've got a great imagination and sense of humour. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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LOL!! I certainly had fun with this one, Judy -- so glad that you did too! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
Comment from Wendy G
Very clever piece of writing for the Dialogue only contest. It is good humoured and well-written, and the reader is able to enjoy the dialogue briskly passing from one to the other. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Very clever piece of writing for the Dialogue only contest. It is good humoured and well-written, and the reader is able to enjoy the dialogue briskly passing from one to the other. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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LOL!! I certainly had fun with this one, Wendy -- so glad that you did too! ;) :)Thanx for stopping by and be sure to drop in again some time: you know the front porch-folio is always open!! ;) Take care out there in your corner of the universe! ;) Yvette
