God's Gentle Whisper
Early mornings at the ocean offer quiet time with the Lord28 total reviews
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
This is lovely! I, too, am a morning person and cherish the early morning when many humans are asleep and the outdoors is just waking. I don't live near the ocean, but I feel the same. The dawn of a new day holds something very special within it, a gift from God and Mother Nature. I like your title, "God's Gentle Whisper". Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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This is lovely! I, too, am a morning person and cherish the early morning when many humans are asleep and the outdoors is just waking. I don't live near the ocean, but I feel the same. The dawn of a new day holds something very special within it, a gift from God and Mother Nature. I like your title, "God's Gentle Whisper". Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your wonderful review.
One can find God anywhere, not just the ocean.
God bless you and yours.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
You took me on this walk with you, with your words. Like a little movie in my mind. I love the single word at the end of each stanza. Lovely.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Cheers!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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You took me on this walk with you, with your words. Like a little movie in my mind. I love the single word at the end of each stanza. Lovely.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Cheers!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from Boogienights
I think everyone feels closer to God when they are out in nature. The ocean is so beautiful, I can see why your senses are heightened. I think this is beautiful poem and I thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I think everyone feels closer to God when they are out in nature. The ocean is so beautiful, I can see why your senses are heightened. I think this is beautiful poem and I thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from T.A. Walk
Great poem! It's important to step back and take a moment to reflect on moments and memories past. I've been ill for a while, and have just gotten back to my writing. Quiet time for forgiving oneself and reflecting upon how to be someone better tomorrow is a constant requirement. Take care and well done.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Great poem! It's important to step back and take a moment to reflect on moments and memories past. I've been ill for a while, and have just gotten back to my writing. Quiet time for forgiving oneself and reflecting upon how to be someone better tomorrow is a constant requirement. Take care and well done.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much. Prayers for healing being sent your way.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lyrical and lovely--bold and elegant! Contestants will be pleased to note this is not an entry!
I breath=>breathe
Rising [COMMA] I walk along the beach to experience all the sights, sounds and scents of the sea
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Lyrical and lovely--bold and elegant! Contestants will be pleased to note this is not an entry!
I breath=>breathe
Rising [COMMA] I walk along the beach to experience all the sights, sounds and scents of the sea
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Your poetic lines wave over me -- beckoning to just relax and let nature's spa refresh me. No artwork needed -- yet you chose a splendid work. Makes one want to linger 'til light from the lighthouse takes the night watch.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Your poetic lines wave over me -- beckoning to just relax and let nature's spa refresh me. No artwork needed -- yet you chose a splendid work. Makes one want to linger 'til light from the lighthouse takes the night watch.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you so much for sharing your quiet time of contemplation and resting in the Lord by the sea. Enjoyed reading all lovely descriptions of the sea and the birds there.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for sharing your quiet time of contemplation and resting in the Lord by the sea. Enjoyed reading all lovely descriptions of the sea and the birds there.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful poem you have written describing your times of being alone with God. There is something very relaxing about being by the water, and viewing all the beauties of nature. Time alone with God, is what keeps us going.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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What a beautiful poem you have written describing your times of being alone with God. There is something very relaxing about being by the water, and viewing all the beauties of nature. Time alone with God, is what keeps us going.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your generous review of my poem.
Yes, time alone with God is truly what keeps us going.
Have a wonderful week.
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You are very welcome
