Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

Having a quiet time with God is indeed priceless. It must be very special at the ocean; I do wish I lived near one. But I do know Jesus as my personal Savior, and He said, "I am the Way, the Truth and the Life," so He is all I need! Thank you for sharing your special experience of communing with the Almighty.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021

Thanks so much for your review. It is so much appreciated.

Comment from KSUlshafer

Excellent

So lovely and thought provoking. It makes me want to walk along the shore and feel that same peace you've created here with your words. Very well done:)

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021

Thank you so much for your kind review. I am so humbled.
Have a great week!

Comment from Earl Corp

Exceptional

I'm not usually a fan of free verse poetry but I enjoyed this one. I could feel the peace and spirituality you were expressing in your words. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thank you very much for your very generous review. I am so humbled. Stay safe and healthy as well.

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

this is so close to all time and re you new here if so this is amazing and the picture is really beautiful nice job and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good good day

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thank you so very much for your review.
It is so very much appreciated.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is fine poem you've written here. The layout and the blue colour are superb. The language is articulate and expressive, but you honour the Lord, with an almost Song of Songs narrative, this is rather long, but beautifully scribed, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Thank you very much for your generous review.

reply by royowen on 27-Feb-2021

Good job

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Very nice poem! A suggestion is the last word in every stanza put a space after it and before the next one for more of a bolder meaning.
Example: ("Tranquility at its best as the sun begins to rise over the ocean swells
I breathe in deeply the fresh salty air as I raise my eyes to the heavens
This is my time alone with my God.
(Space)
Priceless!
(Space)
Sedentary in my sand chair my being is serene ...")

Thank you for sharing this well written piece;-)
God bless you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your review. I will revisit my poem and make changes. This is so much appreciated.

reply by Melodie Michelle on 27-Feb-2021

;-)

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I wish I can experience what your poem say: "Soft gentle zephyrs caress my skin as sea grass whispers in the wind,
Seagulls above me chanting in the sky as they welcome the new day. Tranquility at its best as the sun begins to rise over the ocean swells I breathe in deeply the fresh salty air as I raise my eyes to the heavens..." and ... "time alone with my God."

I haven't been to a beach over a year due to COvid-19. I miss the beach and miss the time be on my own with my religion.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your review. It is so very much appreciated.

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I wish I can experience what your poem say: "Soft gentle zephyrs caress my skin as sea grass whispers in the wind,
Seagulls above me chanting in the sky as they welcome the new day. Tranquility at its best as the sun begins to rise over the ocean swells I breathe in deeply the fresh salty air as I raise my eyes to the heavens..." and ... "time alone with my God."

I haven't been to a beach over a year due to COvid-19. I miss the beach and miss the time be on my own with my religion.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your generous review. We are snowbirds and didn't go to the beach until we were here three months for fear of Covid. We found a beach where everyone is respectful of social distancing. Praying that Covid will be gone sooner by later.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I love the Lord so much and the sea. I live near it and am blessed by it. I enjoyed your poem and worshipful presentation. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sally :)) XOs....

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your generous review.
I am very humbled.
God bless you and yours as well.

Comment from bob cullen

Exceptional

Six points for the message contained in this wonderful piece of meditation. You sound as if you've found true peace. As I read through this
my thoughts reminded me of where I truly want to be. Thank you, your work has really provided the lift I needed.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your very generous review. I am so humbled.
I am so happy that my poem provided the lift you needed. We all need to be lifted up by others at times. God bless you and have a blessed weekend.