Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Good Morning Mystery Writer... I love Marvin!!! This is a well written verse and an excellent response to the cartoon prompt. I remember that vibrant cartoon and think you chose a good one to act as your theme/enhancement!! Well done and good luck!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021

Comment from Justin Chopin

Excellent

Fantastic work with this poem. Enjoyed the references to Bugs Bunny and Daffy Duck. Great job in capturing the over ambitious desires of Marvin in your wonderfully rhythmic and well written piece. Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

---

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by Justin Chopin on 03-Feb-2021

You're very welcome.

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

This is cute! I actually had forgotten all about Marvin the Martian. Now I feel like watching him a bit. These cartoon entries are definitely taking me back To my childhood.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

---

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Marvin is my favourite Warner Brothers character who did not get enough airtime.

Comment from kmoss

Good

This is cute and comical. I think the word Earth is too repetitive though. I'm not sure if you purposely included it so many times in this short poem. Just an honest opinion. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021

---

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. I have changed it a little but one of Marvin?s major lines was that he was going to blow up the Earth and I was trying to stress that.

Comment from 4theloveoftrees

Excellent

Excellent submission for the Cartoon Time poetry contest! I was so reminded of childhood days and Marvin with "modulator", "kaboom", "Earthlings"! Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021

---

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

Wow, this is one cartoon that I forgot about! Maybe he came along when I was a little too old for cartoons, but I really enjoyed your poem.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Susan

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021

---

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. You are never too old for cartoons, unfortunately most of the ones today aren't worth watching.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL!! Oh, yes! Who can ever forget Bugs confounding the little determined Marvin on Saturday mornings!! ;) :) A great offering for the contest that provides not only a trip down memory lane but great smiles for the day! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021

---

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Bugs was just trying to save the Earth.