"The Gift of Life."
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Comment from TeriG
I am unsure that the last four lines follow along with the prose prior. I felt the person dying initially but the thoughts dramatically changed from being in the unknown to perhaps being in sin?
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I am unsure that the last four lines follow along with the prose prior. I felt the person dying initially but the thoughts dramatically changed from being in the unknown to perhaps being in sin?
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Obviously you didn't give this to Justice and deserved for half she didn't even read the editors notes.
Yes it is a sin to lose a child no matter to age no matter the race or no matter the sex.
It is a parents Nightmare.
and the only sin about this is not the fact that three out of four people walk this Earth because of my son.
But that I have to live with it everyday.
Thanks for your review Dr Ricky 1024.
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