Her Return
Epic Fantasy Story/Poem contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a a very nice poem (story). I am touched by the story. It is a sad story and the revenge is expected.
I love the following paragraph: "I know someday that you'd return. This comes as no surprise. You're lovely as your mother was and also have her eyes..."
Happy writing.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This is a a very nice poem (story). I am touched by the story. It is a sad story and the revenge is expected.
I love the following paragraph: "I know someday that you'd return. This comes as no surprise. You're lovely as your mother was and also have her eyes..."
Happy writing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Good. I'm glad you liked my little tale. Have yourself a fantastic day.
Comment from LisaMay
Your story poem is graphic and gripping. I was reading it avidly to see what was going to happen. Two wrongs never made a right, but the sense of justice executed here fit the storyline in a true epic fantasy manner.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Your story poem is graphic and gripping. I was reading it avidly to see what was going to happen. Two wrongs never made a right, but the sense of justice executed here fit the storyline in a true epic fantasy manner.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked my little epic offering. Have yourself a fantastic day.
Comment from Nowae20
Omg this is a master piece. I really love how you told a story in a form of a poem. My heart hurts for the mother and daughter who lost their lives but her take revenge on the king made it worth while. You deserve to win this contest
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Omg this is a master piece. I really love how you told a story in a form of a poem. My heart hurts for the mother and daughter who lost their lives but her take revenge on the king made it worth while. You deserve to win this contest
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Nowae20. I really appreciate the kind words and good luck wishes. I hope you have yourself a great day and thank you again.
