Casino Invitation Accepted
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem
Casino Invitation Accepted
by Mark Schardine
Hello, Mark,
Beautiful tanka with a good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. You showed us what is like to gamble roulette or poker. Well done!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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A 5-7-5-7-7 poem
Casino Invitation Accepted
by Mark Schardine
Hello, Mark,
Beautiful tanka with a good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too. You showed us what is like to gamble roulette or poker. Well done!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
What an interesting topic for a poem. Really unique and well done. I love the last line. It really delivers a kick.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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What an interesting topic for a poem. Really unique and well done. I love the last line. It really delivers a kick.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and insight.
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, those pesky tells. Some read them like a book. It's true that you don't play your cards--you play your opponents. Of course, four aces is a pretty sure thing.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Ah, those pesky tells. Some read them like a book. It's true that you don't play your cards--you play your opponents. Of course, four aces is a pretty sure thing.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and insight.