Hidden Treasures
A Minute poem for spring contest11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This minute poem, Hidden Treasures, has the proper formatting and shows the reader the hard-charging robin bearing up to the cold and producing the next generation. Nice.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This minute poem, Hidden Treasures, has the proper formatting and shows the reader the hard-charging robin bearing up to the cold and producing the next generation. Nice.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Anticipating Spring! writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines for your minute poem form.
Beautiful presentation and imagery. Well chosen words to express the emotions of anticipation.
The scene you created all cozy sipping wine is very enticing.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Anticipating Spring! writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines for your minute poem form.
Beautiful presentation and imagery. Well chosen words to express the emotions of anticipation.
The scene you created all cozy sipping wine is very enticing.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share you insghts. I am glad you enjoyed this piece and appreciate the feedback.
Comment from equestrik
This is a lovely write and a tribute to the beautiful season of Spring. I love this and with Spring, one can never tell when the struggle with winter will end.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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This is a lovely write and a tribute to the beautiful season of Spring. I love this and with Spring, one can never tell when the struggle with winter will end.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Yes, we all could use a little of spring's exuberance right about now. I'm happy you liked this one.
Comment from Wendy G
To see the bird guarding her little nest is indeed a wonderful anticipation of spring, especially during the coldness you describe well. A fresh and original poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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To see the bird guarding her little nest is indeed a wonderful anticipation of spring, especially during the coldness you describe well. A fresh and original poem.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share you insghts. I am glad you enjoyed this piece and appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form. Your words plus the art match perfectly. Good job with the style of the minute poem writing. I really like how you described the robin and her 'gems.'
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Your contest entry is in good form. Your words plus the art match perfectly. Good job with the style of the minute poem writing. I really like how you described the robin and her 'gems.'
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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We could all use a little spring time exuberance and joy right now! I'm glad you liked this little piece of cheer.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Great entry for the Anticipating Spring writing prompt! I love the colors and the imagery;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Great entry for the Anticipating Spring writing prompt! I love the colors and the imagery;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share you insghts. I am glad you enjoyed this piece and appreciate the feedback.
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Comment from Melodie Michelle
Great entry for the Anticipating Spring writing prompt! I love the colors and the imagery;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Great entry for the Anticipating Spring writing prompt! I love the colors and the imagery;-)
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Yes, spring couldn't come fast enough. We could all use a little more sunshine and warmth right now. Thanks for the kind comments.
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Comment from Anne Johnston
I see a mother guard her nest,
a proud red breast.
Beneath green stems -
three precious gems.
A well done poem about spring. We all look forward to it coming soon. Great rhyming and I love that third verse.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I see a mother guard her nest,
a proud red breast.
Beneath green stems -
three precious gems.
A well done poem about spring. We all look forward to it coming soon. Great rhyming and I love that third verse.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share you insghts. I am glad you enjoyed this piece and appreciate the feedback.
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You are very welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem anticipates spring and speaks about the changes in Nature, giving us a picture of a bird family busy caring their family, three precious green eggs, they would be bird gems, the Arctic wind around the environment everywhere; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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This poem anticipates spring and speaks about the changes in Nature, giving us a picture of a bird family busy caring their family, three precious green eggs, they would be bird gems, the Arctic wind around the environment everywhere; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine presentation of a hopeful spring to include new life with vibrant colour. A well worded and metered minute, much enjoyed, roll on spring, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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A fine presentation of a hopeful spring to include new life with vibrant colour. A well worded and metered minute, much enjoyed, roll on spring, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this fun little piece!
