Keys
Hundreds of keys are put away and forgotten.55 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
I award you with my last six! When I taught preschool I had a collection of keys and boxes for the kids to unlock. It seems we always have "lost" keys hanging around with no clue why they are there. What a prompt this would be for a creative writing assignment....or even a fanstory contest? I
Think a lot of writers could get keyed up over that!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I award you with my last six! When I taught preschool I had a collection of keys and boxes for the kids to unlock. It seems we always have "lost" keys hanging around with no clue why they are there. What a prompt this would be for a creative writing assignment....or even a fanstory contest? I
Think a lot of writers could get keyed up over that!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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How exciting to hear your words, I did the same in my classrooms! I am very grateful for the stars and your kind words. Now, there is a sequel, "The Lock"; I couldn't resist a follow up after such a great review. Thank you for your time and kindness.
Blessings,
brigitte
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How soon do you plan to do it so I know if I should reserve a six for you next week
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How soon do you plan to do it so I know if I should reserve a six for you next week
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It is up, thank you kindly.
Brigitte
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I can only imagine the rush of emotions one might experience upon finding a box of KEYS--curiosity, surprise, maybe even amusement. Keys
are such powerful symbols of things once, maybe still, important. Your poem is creatively written and moving.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I can only imagine the rush of emotions one might experience upon finding a box of KEYS--curiosity, surprise, maybe even amusement. Keys
are such powerful symbols of things once, maybe still, important. Your poem is creatively written and moving.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I love your enthusiastic review, thank you. I appreciate your read and kind comments. I was inspired to write a sequel, "The Lock". This was fun to write and your reaction to it was a tribute.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Janet Foor
What intrigue to find a box of keys. Someone at some time added another and another one. I know I hate to through away keys. You just never know where they might fit.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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What intrigue to find a box of keys. Someone at some time added another and another one. I know I hate to through away keys. You just never know where they might fit.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading and your kind review. This was a fun write and the reviews have prompted me to write a sequel. "The Lock". I really am trying to find the locks that go with the keys!
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from A. Willow Bends
And we tend to NEVER throw them away, because we MIGHT, just maybe need them for where they actually fit! This is a very interesting topic you've chosen, creative and unique. The "idea" of the Master, great! Very well written and flows! Love it!
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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And we tend to NEVER throw them away, because we MIGHT, just maybe need them for where they actually fit! This is a very interesting topic you've chosen, creative and unique. The "idea" of the Master, great! Very well written and flows! Love it!
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading and your kind review. This was a fun write and the reviews have prompted me to write a sequel. "The Lock". I really am trying to find the locks that go with the keys! Glad you loved it.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Brigitte - this is a very written poem on an unusual subject written as a result of finding a box of keys - interesting. I identified with this poem - a few years ago I found in my button box the key to the house where I was born and bred. The house has now gone but that key means much to me - a link with my past. I knew the key was to our house because it had the name of the landlord and the town of Newcastle on Tyne embossed on it.
Your lovely poem took me back. I love your term 'Master of the Keys' - you are - they all belong to you. LOL! Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hello Brigitte - this is a very written poem on an unusual subject written as a result of finding a box of keys - interesting. I identified with this poem - a few years ago I found in my button box the key to the house where I was born and bred. The house has now gone but that key means much to me - a link with my past. I knew the key was to our house because it had the name of the landlord and the town of Newcastle on Tyne embossed on it.
Your lovely poem took me back. I love your term 'Master of the Keys' - you are - they all belong to you. LOL! Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I love your enthusiastic review, thank you. I appreciate your read and kind comments. I was inspired to write a sequel, "The Lock". This was fun to write and your reaction to it was a tribute.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Brigitte Elko,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
The last two lines particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hello Brigitte Elko,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
The last two lines particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading and your kind review. This was a fun write and the reviews have prompted me to write a sequel. "The Lock". I really am trying to find the locks that go with the keys!
Blessings,
brigitte
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Brigitte, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Comment from jake cosmos aller
i can relate to this poem about keys. I have keys to ten different rental properties and keys to other things that I am not sure what they mean. Reminds me of a TV series Locke and Key that was pretty good on netflix.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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i can relate to this poem about keys. I have keys to ten different rental properties and keys to other things that I am not sure what they mean. Reminds me of a TV series Locke and Key that was pretty good on netflix.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I remember the series. Thank you for reading and your kind review. This was a fun write and the reviews have prompted me to write a sequel. "The Lock". I really am trying to find the locks that go with the keys!
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Wendy G
Oh my goodness! That would seem like an impossible task! It has nevertheless provided you with a prompt for a well written poem, on an original theme!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Oh my goodness! That would seem like an impossible task! It has nevertheless provided you with a prompt for a well written poem, on an original theme!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading and your kind review. This was a fun write and the reviews have prompted me to write a sequel. "The Lock". I really am trying to find the locks that go with the keys!
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is rather an intriguing poem that I thought could be expanded even more. Maybe a sequel on one or more of the keys is coming up? My favorite line was: Hundreds of hunks of beveled metal
I think this would be great spoken aloud.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This is rather an intriguing poem that I thought could be expanded even more. Maybe a sequel on one or more of the keys is coming up? My favorite line was: Hundreds of hunks of beveled metal
I think this would be great spoken aloud.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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It did sound good aloud! Thank you for reading and your kind review. This was a fun write and the reviews have prompted me to write a sequel. "The Lock". I really am trying to find the locks that go with the keys!
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from QC Poet
It's a mystery wrapped in a riddle for sure - and how we can never find them when we need them so we get more locks. Interesting poem with a great photograph of an old key. Thank you for Sharing this one.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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It's a mystery wrapped in a riddle for sure - and how we can never find them when we need them so we get more locks. Interesting poem with a great photograph of an old key. Thank you for Sharing this one.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading and your kind review. This was a fun write and the reviews have prompted me to write a sequel. "The Lock". I really am trying to find the locks that go with the keys!
Blessings,
brigitte
