Keys
Hundreds of keys are put away and forgotten.55 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
I found this poem to be a well written, mysterious poem. As a fiction writer, it sent my mind in all sorts of directions. I love when poetry causes the reader to think, as the imagery in this piece does. As "Master of the Keys," I hope you enjoy your journey and find answers.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I found this poem to be a well written, mysterious poem. As a fiction writer, it sent my mind in all sorts of directions. I love when poetry causes the reader to think, as the imagery in this piece does. As "Master of the Keys," I hope you enjoy your journey and find answers.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. Now, there is a sequel, "The Lock". This was fun to write and readers seemed to relate to the idea. Thank you for the read and kind review.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from l.raven
Hi Brigitte, LOL...my sweet friend...so good to see you...
I hope and pray you are doing well...and staying safe...
I bet you will hear a lot that will relate to your poem...
I know I do...When my husband passed...I found a circular key chain with I don't know how many keys were on it...
I put it somewhere...just not sure where...LOL...good luck in your screech for the missing key locks...
I love your poem sweet girl...picture...perrrrrfect...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hi Brigitte, LOL...my sweet friend...so good to see you...
I hope and pray you are doing well...and staying safe...
I bet you will hear a lot that will relate to your poem...
I know I do...When my husband passed...I found a circular key chain with I don't know how many keys were on it...
I put it somewhere...just not sure where...LOL...good luck in your screech for the missing key locks...
I love your poem sweet girl...picture...perrrrrfect...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. Now, there is a sequel, "The Lock". This was fun to write and readers seemed to relate to the idea. Thank you for the read and kind review. It is so nice to see you again, I have been gone a long time. Now, I'm trying once again to write.
Blessings,
brigitte
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Brigitte, I think that is an awesome idea sweet girl...I'll keep up as much as I can...I have been off and on for awhile...so many things going on...but I am back now more on than off...LOL...it's wonderful to see you...I hope and pray all is well...it is so great to have you back...Blessing to you my sweet friend...love you...xxoo
Comment from dragonpoet
Brigitte,
Life would be much easier if we had keys to open the boxes with all the answers to our questions. It seems like it would be a hard job to figure out where they all fit.
Nicely done free verse poem using keys and locks as metaphors to getting through life's troubles.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Brigitte,
Life would be much easier if we had keys to open the boxes with all the answers to our questions. It seems like it would be a hard job to figure out where they all fit.
Nicely done free verse poem using keys and locks as metaphors to getting through life's troubles.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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What a pleasure to have you read my work once again. Thank you kindly for these kind and encouraging words.
Blessings,
brigitte
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You're welcome, Brigitte.
Joan
Comment from estory
Nice job focusing on that image of the keys, and we get taken into all kinds of places, all kinds of locked rooms and boxes, through that image. Keys are the rights of passage into all these mysterious places of valuables and sacred places. I also liked the use of the repetition of 'key's to create a sense of rhythm and music in the piece. estory
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Nice job focusing on that image of the keys, and we get taken into all kinds of places, all kinds of locked rooms and boxes, through that image. Keys are the rights of passage into all these mysterious places of valuables and sacred places. I also liked the use of the repetition of 'key's to create a sense of rhythm and music in the piece. estory
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I like your take on my poem, you got it! Thank you for the read and kind words. I couldn't resist a sequel, "The Lock".
Your review was encouraging.
Blessings,
Comment from Poetofheart2013
I really love your poem
Its full of really good
Imaging. And it flows
really good with good
feeling and emotions.
You did a very good job
On it. I really enjoyed
reading it. Keep up
The good work.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I really love your poem
Its full of really good
Imaging. And it flows
really good with good
feeling and emotions.
You did a very good job
On it. I really enjoyed
reading it. Keep up
The good work.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I love your enthusiastic review, thank you. I appreciate your read and kind comments. I was inspired to write a sequel, "The Lock". This was fun to write and your reaction to it was a tribute.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very original poem about keys. I really enjoyed reading it. We do seem to hang on to keys for no apparent reason as we will never find a lock that they fit. Nice one.
Take care. Jen
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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This is a very original poem about keys. I really enjoyed reading it. We do seem to hang on to keys for no apparent reason as we will never find a lock that they fit. Nice one.
Take care. Jen
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I love your enthusiastic review, thank you. I appreciate your read and kind comments. I was inspired to write a sequel, "The Lock". This was fun to write and your reaction to it was a tribute.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Anne Johnston
My quest as Master of the Keys
Unlock with keys the hidden trinkets, dark places
Time consuming search for locks begins
That is my task as Master of the Keys.
A very interesting concept you have portrayed in your excellent poem. As writers, we find the keys that unlock the thoughts flowing through our minds, so that we can open mysteries to others. That's the message I get from your verse.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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My quest as Master of the Keys
Unlock with keys the hidden trinkets, dark places
Time consuming search for locks begins
That is my task as Master of the Keys.
A very interesting concept you have portrayed in your excellent poem. As writers, we find the keys that unlock the thoughts flowing through our minds, so that we can open mysteries to others. That's the message I get from your verse.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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You got my message loud and clear. I appreciate your thoughts and kind words.
Blessings,
brigitte
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You are very welcome.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello BRIGITTE ELKO,
What's a cool poem on Keys? I currently have 9 keys on a key holder. My husband or I have tried to figure out what those keys go too. I am the master of those keys however, I don't have any idea where they go. ha ha. Like your poem, locating a home for the keys have been time consuming. This is a nicely written poem about Keys. I enjoyed this read, and it was a very entertaining. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hello BRIGITTE ELKO,
What's a cool poem on Keys? I currently have 9 keys on a key holder. My husband or I have tried to figure out what those keys go too. I am the master of those keys however, I don't have any idea where they go. ha ha. Like your poem, locating a home for the keys have been time consuming. This is a nicely written poem about Keys. I enjoyed this read, and it was a very entertaining. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I appreciate the fact that you could relate to my poem. Thank you for the read and very kind words. I was inspired to write a sequel, "The Lock".
Blessings,
brigitte
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Amen. You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Isn't it weird what we keep? Your title made me smile. My maiden name is Mannakee, and my brother researched our ancestry to see how we came about it. Apparantly it came from a worker at a monestry, he checked the gates and doors were all locked and was called the, Man of Keys. Clever isn't it. So, did you ever find a home for any of the keys? Well done, I enjoyed your poem. :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Isn't it weird what we keep? Your title made me smile. My maiden name is Mannakee, and my brother researched our ancestry to see how we came about it. Apparantly it came from a worker at a monestry, he checked the gates and doors were all locked and was called the, Man of Keys. Clever isn't it. So, did you ever find a home for any of the keys? Well done, I enjoyed your poem. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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It is no nice to see your name again after my long absence. To post and have it received with such enthusiasm has encouraged me to keep on writing. There is a sequel, "The Lock" inspired by positive comments. Thank you for reading. I have not matched any keys and locks but will keep trying. I love the name "Mannakee" and your comments on ancestry research made me think and smile.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Interesting topic for your poem! Keys are mysterious objects until we know what they open. In our own imagination, that could be a treasure or a Pandora's box of trouble. That is implied in the words of your poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Interesting topic for your poem! Keys are mysterious objects until we know what they open. In our own imagination, that could be a treasure or a Pandora's box of trouble. That is implied in the words of your poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading and your kind review. This was a fun write and the reviews have prompted me to write a sequel. "The Lock". I really am trying to find the locks that go with the keys!
Blessings,
brigitte
