Keys
Hundreds of keys are put away and forgotten.55 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Brigitte,
You've written an excellent free verse poem about the lost keys
and their new master. So many secrets hidden away,
now all you need to do is find the locks,
though some secrets are best left hidden.
I think this poem might benefit from adding punctuation.
As it's posted, it is one long sentence.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hello Brigitte,
You've written an excellent free verse poem about the lost keys
and their new master. So many secrets hidden away,
now all you need to do is find the locks,
though some secrets are best left hidden.
I think this poem might benefit from adding punctuation.
As it's posted, it is one long sentence.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading and the punctuation suggestion. I am glad that overall you liked the content since you seemed to relate by your comments. It was a fun write.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from amada
This was a delightful mystery poem...For sure, I would like to know more about this treasure chest of keys. You wrote a great poem about the meaning of this discovery. If you find out, let us know.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This was a delightful mystery poem...For sure, I would like to know more about this treasure chest of keys. You wrote a great poem about the meaning of this discovery. If you find out, let us know.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your positive comments. Reviews that were so positive inspired me to write a sequel, "The Lock".
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Brigitte, being a very practical person I would say that unless you live in a castle that has all kinds of passageways and strange boxes hidden in the towers you are going to have a very tough job getting anywhere is the keeper of the keys.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Dear Brigitte, being a very practical person I would say that unless you live in a castle that has all kinds of passageways and strange boxes hidden in the towers you are going to have a very tough job getting anywhere is the keeper of the keys.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I don't live in a castle but have found many locked "locks". Diaries, boxes, doors, sheds, etc. This quest will lead to future poems and already inspired "The Lock". Thank you for reading.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Cathy M
I loved this poem. It holds the mystery of the boxes and the mystery of where these keys belong. How many times I look at my key ring that is loaded with forgotten keys. You captured that feeling.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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I loved this poem. It holds the mystery of the boxes and the mystery of where these keys belong. How many times I look at my key ring that is loaded with forgotten keys. You captured that feeling.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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It is no nice to see your name again after my long absence. To post and have it received with such enthusiasm has encouraged me to keep on writing. There is a sequel, "The Lock" inspired by positive comments. Thank you for reading.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from greyson ernst
this is is very very good this is impressive nice job and how is this not #1 all time best and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good rest of the weekend
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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this is is very very good this is impressive nice job and how is this not #1 all time best and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good rest of the weekend
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you Greyson for this wowing review. I appreciate the time you took to be so generous. You have a great week also.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hundreds of keys are put away and forgotten.
Keys
by Brigitte Elko
Hello, Brigitte,
Beautiful and very interesting poem. It could be part of a story about the key or flash fiction. Maybe you could use the keys to make jewelry. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Hundreds of keys are put away and forgotten.
Keys
by Brigitte Elko
Hello, Brigitte,
Beautiful and very interesting poem. It could be part of a story about the key or flash fiction. Maybe you could use the keys to make jewelry. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading and your kind review.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is very real. Most people including me have keys which look familiar but have no idea what they are. Yet the keys that we are looking for, we cannot find them.
Good writing. Thanks for sharing.
PS:If you like Ghost Story, Pregnant Ghost chapter 6 is available for review. It is now posted on Fanstory cover page.
Thank your support.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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This is very real. Most people including me have keys which look familiar but have no idea what they are. Yet the keys that we are looking for, we cannot find them.
Good writing. Thanks for sharing.
PS:If you like Ghost Story, Pregnant Ghost chapter 6 is available for review. It is now posted on Fanstory cover page.
Thank your support.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading and yhe kind review, I will check out Ghost Story.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from Begin Again
I found a similar box when my parents passed away; some extremely old, others shiny and bright. Some had little tags, but most had none. Now I know why that little box sat undisturbed in a drawer, because I too will never solve the mystery of all those keys. Well written and brought back a memory too. Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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I found a similar box when my parents passed away; some extremely old, others shiny and bright. Some had little tags, but most had none. Now I know why that little box sat undisturbed in a drawer, because I too will never solve the mystery of all those keys. Well written and brought back a memory too. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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I am delighted that you could relate and enjoyed my little poem. It was a fun write. Thank you for reading and the kind comments.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from June Sargent
This is fascinating! You could write a book about these keys - each of them could be a short story. Title: Keeper of the Keys. I'm glad you shared this with us - keep us posted should you figure out who or what they belonged to...
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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This is fascinating! You could write a book about these keys - each of them could be a short story. Title: Keeper of the Keys. I'm glad you shared this with us - keep us posted should you figure out who or what they belonged to...
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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I like your idea and may use it if that's okay with you. Thank you for reading and the nice review. I enjoyed this poem so much I wrote a sequel, "The Lock". Will write more...
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment from nomi338
Obviously, someone with a diabolical sense of humor has sentenced you to a mission of becoming a searcher of locks. I do hope that you unlock at least one lock to disclose some kind of treasure and not just some useless curiosity.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Obviously, someone with a diabolical sense of humor has sentenced you to a mission of becoming a searcher of locks. I do hope that you unlock at least one lock to disclose some kind of treasure and not just some useless curiosity.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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I hope so too! I am making it a mission during this time of isolation. Thank you for reading.
Blessings,
brigitte
