Comment from duaneculbertson

Excellent

Clever. Looks like you satisfied the criteria. Love the topic too!
The burnished armor certainly can be described as brightly.
I think the only weakness is "slightly" - thought perhaps I am not understanding what your intention was here.
Nice job!

Dave

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

Wow, this is awesome! I was feeling too impatient to try the Tyburn, but you nailed it. Good luck in the contest. I'm predicting this one as the winner. I'd give it six stars, but I'm flat out.

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021

You should give it a try! Thank you for stopping by on this one, Erika!

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021

Thank you so much!!