The Man Behind the Armor
Mmmmm...13 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Nolen
Whoa! This was great. The picture was perfect for this poem. The words you chose were really good. I tried this poem. I found it difficult. But you are one that really nailed it. Great job.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Whoa! This was great. The picture was perfect for this poem. The words you chose were really good. I tried this poem. I found it difficult. But you are one that really nailed it. Great job.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thanx for the review on this one, Sharon -- glad you enjoyed! Be sure to stop by my front porch-folio anytime, my lady, and have a wonderful week ahead!! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The image you create will draw the reader in, some attracted, so jealous, some regretting, some egoically identifying, others, admiringly. I like the humor. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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The image you create will draw the reader in, some attracted, so jealous, some regretting, some egoically identifying, others, admiringly. I like the humor. Well thought out.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Liz! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This knight sounds like he a most welcome sight here, a guest with the best vest will not jest, but pass the test in this poetry contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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This knight sounds like he a most welcome sight here, a guest with the best vest will not jest, but pass the test in this poetry contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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LOL! What a wonderful review -- and I'm still smiling!! THANK YOU for that gift!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet!
You have three votes now!
I liked your entry because
The subject was fresh
The rhyme made sense
The poem flowed well
Best of luck in the competition!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Ciao mystery poet!
You have three votes now!
I liked your entry because
The subject was fresh
The rhyme made sense
The poem flowed well
Best of luck in the competition!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Wow!! Thank you so much!! 8-)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
hahahahaha You are voicing the hopes and dreams of every princess in every tower that ever lived. I can't help but think of the princess in Shrek. She did not get - initially - what she thought she wanted. Sometimes our dreams come in differently shaped packages. Thanks!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
hahahahaha You are voicing the hopes and dreams of every princess in every tower that ever lived. I can't help but think of the princess in Shrek. She did not get - initially - what she thought she wanted. Sometimes our dreams come in differently shaped packages. Thanks!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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That they certainly do, don't they? ! ;) Thanks so much for the review, Robyn!! ;)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Tyburn poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. You followed the rules with excellent word choices. It flows pretty good. I love the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Tyburn poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. You followed the rules with excellent word choices. It flows pretty good. I love the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the great review today -- enjoy the weekend!
Comment from Carlos' girl
Wow. This is a great tyburn. The Excellent concept and well executed lines say it all say it right.. The image is pretty perfect too. I may vote for you i doubt anyone can outdo you
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Wow. This is a great tyburn. The Excellent concept and well executed lines say it all say it right.. The image is pretty perfect too. I may vote for you i doubt anyone can outdo you
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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What a great review - thank you so much! Have a great weekend!
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You too
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The knight in the night with the shiny armour: "
Just beneath that brightly knightly vest
There's a more than slightly sightly guest" thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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The knight in the night with the shiny armour: "
Just beneath that brightly knightly vest
There's a more than slightly sightly guest" thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for stopping in for the review today!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem is fun and I wish I can write one today or tomorrow. You have inspired me. I might write one now.
You have painted quite a man with an armor.
Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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This poem is fun and I wish I can write one today or tomorrow. You have inspired me. I might write one now.
You have painted quite a man with an armor.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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From your review, I surmise that you liked it. However, you did not tell me what needed to be fixed in order to merit the four stars (indicating that 'adjustments are needed'). Could you please share those suggested changes; otherwise, I'm left wondering what should be done to make it better.... thank you for your time.
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Sorry that was a mistake. I have changed to Five stars.
Comment from Jay Squires
There's definitely a Don Quixote-ish feel about this poem--I hope intentionally. Whether or not, it hangs together nicely, with a catchy two-syllable meter which is carried forward into the last two lines. Good job. I think it will do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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There's definitely a Don Quixote-ish feel about this poem--I hope intentionally. Whether or not, it hangs together nicely, with a catchy two-syllable meter which is carried forward into the last two lines. Good job. I think it will do well in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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I'm all for battling those windmills, Jay (wink, wink).... Thank you for the great review!
