Prayer for the Times
And for the people living through them...23 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Prayer for the Times', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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'Prayer for the Times', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this shortie, Duchess ? hope all?s well in your sphere today!! ;) Take care and have a sunshiny week of wonders! ;) Yvette
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Yvette, my possum.
As always you're very welcome :)))
God bless stay safe! and have a great week.
the Duchess
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
This is beautifully written with words of hope and joy that someday, we might return to happier times. I love it. Well done, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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This is beautifully written with words of hope and joy that someday, we might return to happier times. I love it. Well done, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much, 4thlove, for the lovely review -- just know that we need some peace in these chaotic times... ;) Take care of you out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from jaded831
Outstanding, your poem reflects my heart, and paints a beautiful picture in my mind. We all pray for peace, hopefully God will hear us. We need unity not division. Lets unite to fix the problems we agree on and worry about the others later.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Outstanding, your poem reflects my heart, and paints a beautiful picture in my mind. We all pray for peace, hopefully God will hear us. We need unity not division. Lets unite to fix the problems we agree on and worry about the others later.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much, my lady, for the lovely review -- just know that we need some peace in these chaotic times... ;) Take care of you out there! ;) Yvette
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You take care as well.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a great poem for the 30 syllable contest. The rhymes are excellent, I just think that bear calm should maybe be bearing calm for the metre and for conservation of tense between the two verses. On the plus side, you have create multiple rhymes that don't detract from the story line. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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This is a great poem for the 30 syllable contest. The rhymes are excellent, I just think that bear calm should maybe be bearing calm for the metre and for conservation of tense between the two verses. On the plus side, you have create multiple rhymes that don't detract from the story line. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
What an outstanding poem/prayer for these times!
Dawn/Morn always brings with her a plethora of positive possibilities. We could all certainly use that magic of "needed smiles." (I am certain I see them everyday - even behind these @$@$@$!!! masks!)
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hello Mystery Writer!
What an outstanding poem/prayer for these times!
Dawn/Morn always brings with her a plethora of positive possibilities. We could all certainly use that magic of "needed smiles." (I am certain I see them everyday - even behind these @$@$@$!!! masks!)
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, my lady -- would that we could all find just simple slice of serenity today sans masks!
Comment from Wendy G
This is very lovely, and so timely and relevant to so many who are really struggling in the world right now. The serenity and peace of the image also contributes well. Well written.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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This is very lovely, and so timely and relevant to so many who are really struggling in the world right now. The serenity and peace of the image also contributes well. Well written.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, Wendy -- would that we could all find just simple slice of serenity today!
Comment from Anne Johnston
A beautiful prayer and one that resonates with us all. This past year has been so different from what we are used to and it has been hope and trust in the Lord that has kept us going.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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A beautiful prayer and one that resonates with us all. This past year has been so different from what we are used to and it has been hope and trust in the Lord that has kept us going.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, Anne -- would that we could all find just simple slice of serenity today!
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You are welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely prayer poem in these two 15-syllable stanzas that meet the contest challenge so very well. Yes, may peace "flood hearts with needed smiles!" Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Lovely prayer poem in these two 15-syllable stanzas that meet the contest challenge so very well. Yes, may peace "flood hearts with needed smiles!" Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, Helen -- would that we could all find just simple slice of serenity today!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a beautiful poem you have written. The image and the words that are written are very meaningful. The warmth of the morning will bring peace, falling rain and gentle breezes.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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what a beautiful poem you have written. The image and the words that are written are very meaningful. The warmth of the morning will bring peace, falling rain and gentle breezes.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, Rosemary -- would that we could all find just simple slice of serenity today!
Comment from DonandVicki
Your well constructed poetic vers ebbs and flows off the tongue and the rhyme is perfectly set in the stanzas. The Image complements your poem perfectly. Don
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Your well constructed poetic vers ebbs and flows off the tongue and the rhyme is perfectly set in the stanzas. The Image complements your poem perfectly. Don
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Wow, Don! Thank you so very much for the encouraging review here -- we surely could all use some serenity now, yeah? Happy Weekend!
