Solitude
2 line poem26 total reviews
Comment from CD Richards
Tick, tick, tick for the syllable count, internal and external rhymes. Plus, your word choices perfectly convey the intended tone of the poem. And to top it off, the angel in a bubble is an ideal match for the subject. So, well done, Melissa. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Tick, tick, tick for the syllable count, internal and external rhymes. Plus, your word choices perfectly convey the intended tone of the poem. And to top it off, the angel in a bubble is an ideal match for the subject. So, well done, Melissa. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hey there Craig... Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!! I appreciate your taking the time to read and review! :)
Glad you like the angel... she seemed to need some down time... LOL
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your essence poem, Melissa! I like your fresh choice of rhymes (wistful-blissful, mood-solitude) - very creative for this extremely tight short form! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Great job with your essence poem, Melissa! I like your fresh choice of rhymes (wistful-blissful, mood-solitude) - very creative for this extremely tight short form! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hey Sweet Helen. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!! I appreciate your taking the time to read and review! :)
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
Perfect entry for the contest. It paints an idyllic scene in just two lines. At the end of the day, that's all I want- some blissful solitude. Love the artwork as well.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Perfect entry for the contest. It paints an idyllic scene in just two lines. At the end of the day, that's all I want- some blissful solitude. Love the artwork as well.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Good morning June. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!! I appreciate your taking the time to read and review! :)
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine rhyming two liner here Melissa and sometimes I just love being on my own and having time to myself too, much enjoyed, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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A fine rhyming two liner here Melissa and sometimes I just love being on my own and having time to myself too, much enjoyed, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hey there Dolly. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!! I appreciate your taking the time to read and review! :)
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Those who haven't tried the essence poem don't realize how tricky--and challenging--it is to convey a lucid, poetic thought in just 12 syllables!
Your essence poem is lovely and meaningful.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Those who haven't tried the essence poem don't realize how tricky--and challenging--it is to convey a lucid, poetic thought in just 12 syllables!
Your essence poem is lovely and meaningful.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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I really appreciate you saying how complicated this form can be. I did find myself pushing and pulling to make it all correct. Thank you Janice for your understanding on this one. :)
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
Encased in a bubble with nothing to fear and no noise to be heard, writing to your heart's content, Melissa. :) But two lines? I expect a lengthier poem shall emerge from your pen of delights. :) This is a good offering for the Two Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Encased in a bubble with nothing to fear and no noise to be heard, writing to your heart's content, Melissa. :) But two lines? I expect a lengthier poem shall emerge from your pen of delights. :) This is a good offering for the Two Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Jose. I am glad you enjoyed this two line verse for the contest. I do crave solitude sometimes and love to fill it full of poetry. Such a rare thing to accomplish these days. :)
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very nicely written two line poem. I'm in a wistful mood for blissful solitude. Very beautiful photo to go with your words. Depicting solitude. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is a very nicely written two line poem. I'm in a wistful mood for blissful solitude. Very beautiful photo to go with your words. Depicting solitude. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Joanne. I am glad you enjoyed this two line verse for the contest. I do crave solitude sometimes and love to fill it full of poetry. Such a rare thing to accomplish these days. :)
Melissa
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Your welcome
Comment from Pantygynt
Yes indeed. This is a neat solution to the challenge. Happy on your own it seems while i struggle to wright something sensible in review that takes up more than one hundred and fifty characters.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Yes indeed. This is a neat solution to the challenge. Happy on your own it seems while i struggle to wright something sensible in review that takes up more than one hundred and fifty characters.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hahaha... I know what you mean. Perhaps you should develop a closing line like Sally has done. She says what she wants to say and then pops on a generic line she uses for each review. Effective and I do not think FS Tom has said anything to here about it. Thanks!
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Perfectly done like a fine steak on a beautiful platter. This is delicious and served up for a contest win.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Perfectly done like a fine steak on a beautiful platter. This is delicious and served up for a contest win.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Sally. I am glad you enjoyed this two line verse for the contest. I do crave solitude sometimes and love to fill it full of poetry. Such a rare thing to accomplish these days. :)
Melissa
Comment from royowen
What a very good essence poem my friend, it's a beaut, the rhyming clever, and almost everybody likes solitude at some tome or other, great rhyming, and exact syllable, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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What a very good essence poem my friend, it's a beaut, the rhyming clever, and almost everybody likes solitude at some tome or other, great rhyming, and exact syllable, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Roy. I am glad you enjoyed this two line verse for the contest. I do crave solitude sometimes and love to fill it full of poetry. Such a rare thing to accomplish these days. :)
Melissa
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It is, well done
