Solitude
2 line poem26 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a beautiful picture that perfectly illustrates the two line poem that you present us with. You know more than we do the challenge it was to maintain all the parameters of these poetic restrictions. You have in these two lines accomplish the literary task but also tapped into the desire and requirement of some alone, me time! Thanks for sharing, sorry I didn't catch it earlier but better late than never. I like this poem. Embrace and love from above.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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This is a beautiful picture that perfectly illustrates the two line poem that you present us with. You know more than we do the challenge it was to maintain all the parameters of these poetic restrictions. You have in these two lines accomplish the literary task but also tapped into the desire and requirement of some alone, me time! Thanks for sharing, sorry I didn't catch it earlier but better late than never. I like this poem. Embrace and love from above.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Your encouraging and articulate review really lift my spirits, Dr. Nad. Thanks so very much!!!
Melissa
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You are so very welcome. Sorry to be so late in response.
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line poem, Solitude, has the proper formatting and brings the reader into the state of restfulness of which one may only attain alone.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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This two-line poem, Solitude, has the proper formatting and brings the reader into the state of restfulness of which one may only attain alone.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much, Bill!!!
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the need we have from time to time just to be free from everyone else around us and find some solitude where nine can find us for a while.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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A very well-written poem about the need we have from time to time just to be free from everyone else around us and find some solitude where nine can find us for a while.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks so very much, Sandra!!
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
We all need time to ourselves to recharge, rethink just be. Be swept away in our daydreams away from the craziness of this world. Your poem is well-written. Your great word choice puts the reader in a blissful mood. Great job as always.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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We all need time to ourselves to recharge, rethink just be. Be swept away in our daydreams away from the craziness of this world. Your poem is well-written. Your great word choice puts the reader in a blissful mood. Great job as always.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much, Misty. Much appreciated!!
Melissa
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, there are times when solitude is a beautiful precious time, away from the mad rush of everyday life. Your two line poem expresses just that thought, very well, and with a beautiful image.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Yes, there are times when solitude is a beautiful precious time, away from the mad rush of everyday life. Your two line poem expresses just that thought, very well, and with a beautiful image.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hi Wendy. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!! I appreciate your time you have given to read and review! :)
Melissa
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Melissa
I like this and your image complements your words nice presentation and good rhyming also sometimes some wistful solitude is looked forward to
Good luck in this contest
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hi Melissa
I like this and your image complements your words nice presentation and good rhyming also sometimes some wistful solitude is looked forward to
Good luck in this contest
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Good Morning Chris... ( or afternoon). Haha. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!! I appreciate the time you gave to read and review! :)
Melissa
Comment from Goodadvicechan
very creative two lines.
"I'm in a wistful mood
for blissful solitude."
I like them. I agree with them. It happens. It is a wonder.
Happy writing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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very creative two lines.
"I'm in a wistful mood
for blissful solitude."
I like them. I agree with them. It happens. It is a wonder.
Happy writing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much!
Melissa
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The sentiments described in this poem are wonderful. However, I'm not sure that technically it has the exact hallmarks of an essence poem. We are both entering this contest, so may the best man win!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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The sentiments described in this poem are wonderful. However, I'm not sure that technically it has the exact hallmarks of an essence poem. We are both entering this contest, so may the best man win!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hi Katherine. I hope they will accept this entry, but perhaps.. blissful and wistful need to be true rhymes... oh, well. I appreciate your comments and look forward to seeing you in class!!
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
You did a masterful job of getting your double rhyme in! Sometimes we need our solitude. It's nice if you have a place to retreat to in order to find it. Excellent idea for the two line poem contest, and best of luck. The artwork is striking and conveys your idea of the wistful mood. judi
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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You did a masterful job of getting your double rhyme in! Sometimes we need our solitude. It's nice if you have a place to retreat to in order to find it. Excellent idea for the two line poem contest, and best of luck. The artwork is striking and conveys your idea of the wistful mood. judi
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much, Judi. I am glad you liked it. Hugs!
Melissa
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from DonandVicki
And a wistful image to complement your poem, nice hair too. We all are getting a good dose of solitude with this corona virus. I love the black and white mood of your poem.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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And a wistful image to complement your poem, nice hair too. We all are getting a good dose of solitude with this corona virus. I love the black and white mood of your poem.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Hi D&A. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!! I appreciate your taking the time to read and review! :)
Melissa
