Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 107 "Bernie Why the Mittens? "Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Eeeeeyeeeewww! Okay, so your syllable count and rhyme is certainly there so two thumbs up in that department... but I'm not sure I understand the overall meaning here... :) Best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Eeeeeyeeeewww! Okay, so your syllable count and rhyme is certainly there so two thumbs up in that department... but I'm not sure I understand the overall meaning here... :) Best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thanks for Reading, Reviewing, and Rating this poem offering.
The feet are mine as a result of diabetes, thought Bernie could done worse if he showed his as a meme. Thanks again
Comment from tfawcus
The double rhyme at the end of each line meets the contest requirement perfectly. I was interested to see on the news recently that those mittens have been auctioned and raised a great deal of money to help those in dire need.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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The double rhyme at the end of each line meets the contest requirement perfectly. I was interested to see on the news recently that those mittens have been auctioned and raised a great deal of money to help those in dire need.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering the feet are mine due to diabetes. I got a weird sense of humor.
