The Spirit of the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Let there Be Light"Newylwed homesteader Jane becomes a widow
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Comment from royowen
How exciting, Standing Bear has followed Jane an Little Deer, into the cave, because he killed Stomping Buffalo, and the escaped the confines and dangers of the cave, and now they've encountered braves chasing after them, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Turn a fiery (read) red? 2: I looked a(t) Little Dee 3 : Some buffalo jerk(y) ...
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How exciting, Standing Bear has followed Jane an Little Deer, into the cave, because he killed Stomping Buffalo, and the escaped the confines and dangers of the cave, and now they've encountered braves chasing after them, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : Turn a fiery (read) red? 2: I looked a(t) Little Dee 3 : Some buffalo jerk(y) ...
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
An interesting chapter in your book as you tell the journey of the escape of Jane and Little Bear. They are surprised by the arrival of Standing Bear who actually helps them.
Thank you for sharing,
Rhonda
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An interesting chapter in your book as you tell the journey of the escape of Jane and Little Bear. They are surprised by the arrival of Standing Bear who actually helps them.
Thank you for sharing,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is such a wonderful story to read and follow. I always feel like I know the girls so well and I wish the best for them at their every move. You've done a spectacular job with this.
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This is such a wonderful story to read and follow. I always feel like I know the girls so well and I wish the best for them at their every move. You've done a spectacular job with this.
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
