Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

This is a lovely spiritual poem, and a testimony about what God does to cleanse and renew the believer's heart.

Here are some suggestions for revisions:

God and Jesus is with You Always
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God and Jesus Are with You Always

from all your spoils,
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from everything spoiled,

by cleanses your negativity.
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He cleanses your negativity.

remember that God is who you live.
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remember that God is who makes you live.

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Thank you for sharing your inspiration.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021

Thanks!

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 29-Jan-2021

You're very welcome. May God bless you, my friend! - Mary Kay

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 29-Jan-2021

You're very welcome, Raul. May God bless you wonderfully. - Mary Kay

Comment from Jean Lutz1

Excellent

Best wishes with the prompt. Art & words blend to deliver the trinity. Surely a message for a time such as this. After a long time away I've returned to FanStory -- feels like I am returning to my first love.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021

Thank you!

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Very uplifting poem. God does wash away everybody's sins. He died on the cross for us all and rose from the dead. He is the Almighty. A white dove is a symbol for the Holy Spirit inspired by Jesus's baptism.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thanks!