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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your presentation i beautiful, YM. The picture is outstanding. Your color scheme is regal. This is one of your best poems! I love the repeating of the when/what/where intros to the verses. You used some alliteration and rhymes well, too.
Thank you for sharing and caring.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Oh, Jan, you humble me. You know, I found myself crying a bit as I penned this one, really not like me, but I guess I understand. Thanx for the stars, Beautiful Lady! Joan's testimony and smiles will certainly be missed over in my little corner of the universe...
    Here's a big wish for surprises and sunshine for the weekend ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Wendy G
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That is such a beautiful poem, and a beautiful tribute to this lady. I am too new to the site to know her, but from what I have read, she seems to be a wonderful, gracious, loving and gifted lady.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thanx for stopping by on this one, Wendy. Joan's testimony and smiles will certainly be missed over in my little corner of the universe...
    Here's a big wish for surprises and sunshine for the weekend ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
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I never read her and did not know her, but a voice that is silent echoes in my heart, Yvette. I wish I knew her. The last I heard was from Helen, she said her husband said she was in a coma. My prayers are with her and her family.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thanx for stopping by on this one, too, Jose. Joan's testimony and smiles will certainly be missed over in my little corner of the universe...
    Here's another big wish for surprises and sunshine for the weekend ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for this beautiful poem, Yvette! You show us that that sting of death has been removed by the One Who welcomes us beyond this world with His everlasting arms.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thanx for stopping by on this one, Helen. As I said before, Joan's testimony and smiles will certainly be missed over in my little corner of the universe...
    Here's a big wish for surprises and sunshine for the weekend ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your poem. I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poetry. Thanks for sharing!

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    So good of you to drop by, Raul -- thanx for the great review, sir! ;) Yvette
reply by Raul1 on 28-Jan-2021
    You're welcome!
Comment from DonandVicki
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I will miss Joan and her posts. I do hope that she can find peace soon. I enjoyed reading your tribute to her. A well crafted and heart warming piece. Don

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thanx for stopping by on this one, you two. Joan's testimony and smiles will certainly be missed over in my little corner of the universe...
    Here's a big wish for a great weekend ahead! ;) Yvette