Tactile Emotions
More powerful than reality's touch...34 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Tactile Emotions, has the right set up and finds that the feelings of the heart and the feelings of the hands combine well.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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This four-line poem, Tactile Emotions, has the right set up and finds that the feelings of the heart and the feelings of the hands combine well.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Bill! :)
Comment from Sally Law
A beauty you have here in four line poetry, dear Yvette. Congratulations on your win with this. I knew it would do well.
Blessings to you, and six stars for your crown, my lady,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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A beauty you have here in four line poetry, dear Yvette. Congratulations on your win with this. I knew it would do well.
Blessings to you, and six stars for your crown, my lady,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Oh, my beautiful Lady Sal, you are so wonderful!! ;) Thank you, THANK YOU for saving these for me -- makes them all the more special!! ;) Make some time for sunshiny warmth on your face today! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is beautiful, YM. I love the image and when paired with your words, your poem is memorable. Great job with the requirements of the contest.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Your presentation is beautiful, YM. I love the image and when paired with your words, your poem is memorable. Great job with the requirements of the contest.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thanx for stopping in on this one, Jan -- sometimes those emotions are so strong we can almost touch them, yeah? :) ;) You take good care out there this afternoon and stay warm! ;) Yvette
Comment from donette1914
That is so good and I feel you will properly win
I like the way you write and it draws ones in and you make this come to life
simply outstanding!
well chosen words to compliment your work
very believable and thought out
thank you for sharing. I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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That is so good and I feel you will properly win
I like the way you write and it draws ones in and you make this come to life
simply outstanding!
well chosen words to compliment your work
very believable and thought out
thank you for sharing. I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Oh, such a lovely and encouraging review, Donette -- thank you, THANK YOU!! ;) Sometimes those emotions are so strong we can almost touch them, yeah? :) ;) You take good care of you out there and good to read you again!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Iza Deleanu
, I think you have a winner. Soft memories that touched your soul, what a wonderful image. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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, I think you have a winner. Soft memories that touched your soul, what a wonderful image. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Iza... was one of those shorties that kinda wrote itself... ;) ;) Take care up there, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Oooh this is a really "pretty" poem with eloquent words that create a dreamy atmosphere. "Velvet whispers that invade my dreams" is a really great line! Good luck in the contest!
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Oooh this is a really "pretty" poem with eloquent words that create a dreamy atmosphere. "Velvet whispers that invade my dreams" is a really great line! Good luck in the contest!
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thanx for your review, Susan -- things are a bit crazy, so the 'shorties' work best these days... Looking forward for March to live out her calling this calendar year: In like a lion, out like a lamb!! ;) :) You take care out there and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
You certainly met the style standard for the four word poem and the syllable distribution. The meaning is pretty clear and is expressed in surreal, descriptive words. At first, I thought metaphorical, but I changed my mind to surreal.
Good luck in the contest.
Da Z
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hello Yvette.
You certainly met the style standard for the four word poem and the syllable distribution. The meaning is pretty clear and is expressed in surreal, descriptive words. At first, I thought metaphorical, but I changed my mind to surreal.
Good luck in the contest.
Da Z
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thanx for your review, Z -- things are a bit crazy, so the 'shorties' work best these days... Looking forward for March to live out her calling this calendar year: In like a lion, out like a lamb!! ;) :) You take care out there my red-pilled friend and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
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You're very welcome Yvette. Short stuff is what I write. I like the "red-pilled" reference. I guess it's me and Neo along with some others. :-)))
You have a good weekend too.
Da Z
Comment from royowen
I'm glad you're back, a flying visit is better than no visit atall, there was bad news, but I hope can change, Helen said JoanE was in a coma and on morphine, she had had liver cancer. Great entry in this poetry contest Yvette, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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I'm glad you're back, a flying visit is better than no visit atall, there was bad news, but I hope can change, Helen said JoanE was in a coma and on morphine, she had had liver cancer. Great entry in this poetry contest Yvette, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thanx for your review, Roy -- things are a bit crazy, so the 'shorties' work best these days... Looking forward for March to live out her calling this calendar year: In like a lion, out like a lamb!! ;) :) You take care down over there and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
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Bless you
Comment from poetwatch
I thought I heard your whisper one lonely night, Yvette. ;) Where you been woman? I missed you and your poetry as well as those almost forgotten stories. It looks like a good day when our dreams like to play. This is a very good and somewhat stirring entry for the Four Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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I thought I heard your whisper one lonely night, Yvette. ;) Where you been woman? I missed you and your poetry as well as those almost forgotten stories. It looks like a good day when our dreams like to play. This is a very good and somewhat stirring entry for the Four Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thanx for your review, Jose -- things are a bit crazy, so the 'shorties' work best these days... Looking forward for March to live out her calling this calendar year: In like a lion, out like a lamb!! ;) :) You take care over there in the Lone Star State and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear yvette, I am so happy to know that you are back, but why did you have to give me a 'think piece' like this, right off the bat?
after some thought I wanted to ask the question are they tactile emotions, or tactile memories?
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Dear yvette, I am so happy to know that you are back, but why did you have to give me a 'think piece' like this, right off the bat?
after some thought I wanted to ask the question are they tactile emotions, or tactile memories?
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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LOL!! Let's just say I'm back amidst the chaos of life, my lady (grins)... it may be touch and go over the next few weeks, but this is my 'escape' that I've been missing, so I?ll definitely be lurking here and there! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Suzanna -- have a wonderful day out there! ;) Yvette