Nick's eef and eer Ho se
Working in a restaurant42 total reviews
Comment from Mabaker12
Great story reminds me of my time as 'hey girl table two ready!' I think Nick being Greek had no time to learn names, and yes I remember him giving a parcel of fish and chips to any old bloke who couldn't pay.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Great story reminds me of my time as 'hey girl table two ready!' I think Nick being Greek had no time to learn names, and yes I remember him giving a parcel of fish and chips to any old bloke who couldn't pay.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words. It is appreciated.
Regards,
Mary
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You're welcome
Comment from tfawcus
A human interest story with a difference. Sharp characterisation of a kind of roadhouse that sadly no longer exists, a true democracy if ever there was one. Your description of the decor brings the piece to life but not so much as the sketches of those who worked there. I could empathise with you, having worked as a waiter for a month during university holidays many, many years ago. The pay was appalling, but the camaraderie was fantastic, and the job came with a free meal at the end of the day. What more could one ask?
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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A human interest story with a difference. Sharp characterisation of a kind of roadhouse that sadly no longer exists, a true democracy if ever there was one. Your description of the decor brings the piece to life but not so much as the sketches of those who worked there. I could empathise with you, having worked as a waiter for a month during university holidays many, many years ago. The pay was appalling, but the camaraderie was fantastic, and the job came with a free meal at the end of the day. What more could one ask?
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you Tony for your kind comments and review.
It is much appreciated.
Regards
Mary
Comment from Hannah Baller
Really good plot, nice description and I can see these waitresses in my mind's eye doing their job, and the customers enjoying their company too! I would just say that the paras are a little random, try tightening them up, or spreading them out more evenly, as it read a little awkwardly, trying to find the next sentence.
But I really enjoyed this, will be looking at your other works!
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Really good plot, nice description and I can see these waitresses in my mind's eye doing their job, and the customers enjoying their company too! I would just say that the paras are a little random, try tightening them up, or spreading them out more evenly, as it read a little awkwardly, trying to find the next sentence.
But I really enjoyed this, will be looking at your other works!
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry that you found it difficult to read. Since this is the only complaint. I will let it stand unless I receive more criticism.
Sorry you did not like the work
Regards
Mary
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Oh no, I enjoyed the work! Just a suggestion 😌
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I know it was just the lower rating that indicates adequate. If you check my portfolio you will find a writing on Fanstory.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I would think this is so cheap in the Harvard Square. It was years ago. I visited Harvard University in 2012 with my family to check out colleges for my son. It was also my chance to visit the famous college. The campus was OK and it's full of restaurants and stores. My son didn't even apply after visiting. He went to UCLA and is very successful now after graduating from there. I love the UCLA campus better.
In my twenties, I also worked as a busgirl for two weeks in a Japanese restaurant, which was enough. I like to exercise but not running around restaurants.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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I would think this is so cheap in the Harvard Square. It was years ago. I visited Harvard University in 2012 with my family to check out colleges for my son. It was also my chance to visit the famous college. The campus was OK and it's full of restaurants and stores. My son didn't even apply after visiting. He went to UCLA and is very successful now after graduating from there. I love the UCLA campus better.
In my twenties, I also worked as a busgirl for two weeks in a Japanese restaurant, which was enough. I like to exercise but not running around restaurants.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the review.
Regards
Mary
Comment from muffinmama
What a hit of nostalgia your story is! I can picture the restaurant, and absolutely picture the waitresses. I think most people of a certain age have such a hang-out in their past.
What a better life people would have if there were enough folks out there who knew them by name and made them feel connected.
My only comment re edits would be that there is an inconsistent use of commas. Some sentences that need one don't have it, while others that can do without, do have one. Not an earthshattering issue.
Thanks for a really enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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What a hit of nostalgia your story is! I can picture the restaurant, and absolutely picture the waitresses. I think most people of a certain age have such a hang-out in their past.
What a better life people would have if there were enough folks out there who knew them by name and made them feel connected.
My only comment re edits would be that there is an inconsistent use of commas. Some sentences that need one don't have it, while others that can do without, do have one. Not an earthshattering issue.
Thanks for a really enjoyable read.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the review and comments
Funny about the commas. I made corrections when someone else had me do take them in and out. I will review again as they may not have been correct
Thank you for the help.
Regards
Mary
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I waitressed for a few years, and it is hard work, especially at lunch time. You don't have time to breathe, but you always had time for a smile and a happy greeting as the regulars came in. I loved this, Mary, it brought back a few memories, and smiles. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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I waitressed for a few years, and it is hard work, especially at lunch time. You don't have time to breathe, but you always had time for a smile and a happy greeting as the regulars came in. I loved this, Mary, it brought back a few memories, and smiles. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
It is appreciated.
Regards
Mary
Comment from Cass Carlton
I worked in the hospitality industry for years and loved every minute of it.Sunday afternoon and into evening was by far the best time to be "on the tables" as that was family time. Saturday nights the drunks and party goers were out in force, but Sunday was the day Mummy got a break from cooking tea and Daddy would take the family to the local hotel where they'd all have a smashing "nosh up"
One Sunday a family of eight came in comprising of grand parents, Mother and Father and four children. The father was a clown and "Made up" to the waitress (yup 'twas me). His two sons watched with sidelong grins as he tickled my leg and asked for my phone number.They were extremely nice customers and I let him play his little games. He was harmless after all.Then, I leaned over and said to HIS MOTHER,"He's your little boy is he Madam?" Huge grins all round with his wife beaming at me.The children got the message and ribbed their father all night.He took it all in good part and left a generous tip.I loved hotel work and did bars as well as table waiting.I have so many happy memories of that time of my life, it is a pleasure to revisit them at times like this, cheers Cass
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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I worked in the hospitality industry for years and loved every minute of it.Sunday afternoon and into evening was by far the best time to be "on the tables" as that was family time. Saturday nights the drunks and party goers were out in force, but Sunday was the day Mummy got a break from cooking tea and Daddy would take the family to the local hotel where they'd all have a smashing "nosh up"
One Sunday a family of eight came in comprising of grand parents, Mother and Father and four children. The father was a clown and "Made up" to the waitress (yup 'twas me). His two sons watched with sidelong grins as he tickled my leg and asked for my phone number.They were extremely nice customers and I let him play his little games. He was harmless after all.Then, I leaned over and said to HIS MOTHER,"He's your little boy is he Madam?" Huge grins all round with his wife beaming at me.The children got the message and ribbed their father all night.He took it all in good part and left a generous tip.I loved hotel work and did bars as well as table waiting.I have so many happy memories of that time of my life, it is a pleasure to revisit them at times like this, cheers Cass
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the review. I enjoyed your experience with the dad.
Regards,
Mary
Comment from Jay Squires
Well, Mary, based on your description, imagery, and characterization, I am left wishing I could visit a restaurant like Nick's. It seems like a fun place to enjoy a meal for the atmosphere and the price. But it's all because of your writing skill.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Well, Mary, based on your description, imagery, and characterization, I am left wishing I could visit a restaurant like Nick's. It seems like a fun place to enjoy a meal for the atmosphere and the price. But it's all because of your writing skill.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you Jay for your review and kind comments. It is appreciated.
Take care and regards,
Mary
Comment from Tpa
An extremely likable tale that brought a smile to my face, and a good lesson, remembering the hard work a waitress goes through with very little appreciation. GOOD JOB!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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An extremely likable tale that brought a smile to my face, and a good lesson, remembering the hard work a waitress goes through with very little appreciation. GOOD JOB!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you. I truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you for the rating. I am grateful.
Regards
Mary
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed reading this story. It is true that being a waitress usually requires a lot of work an it helps to be the kind of person that the customers like to have waiting on them. When I was young my Uncle had a small cafe that catered to the working class. I didn't work there as a waitress, but I liked to pretend it did. I'd come in after school and wait tables just for the fun of it. If I'd been paid it would have be hard work and I wouldn't have enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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I enjoyed reading this story. It is true that being a waitress usually requires a lot of work an it helps to be the kind of person that the customers like to have waiting on them. When I was young my Uncle had a small cafe that catered to the working class. I didn't work there as a waitress, but I liked to pretend it did. I'd come in after school and wait tables just for the fun of it. If I'd been paid it would have be hard work and I wouldn't have enjoyed it.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you Beth for your review. It is appreciated.
Regards
Mary
