God And Man
A Spiritual Poem; Contest Over; Edited Today119 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Your words speak the basic truth that every man's actions and beliefs are personal to the individual, and the final judgement on those actions is in the hands of God.
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Your words speak the basic truth that every man's actions and beliefs are personal to the individual, and the final judgement on those actions is in the hands of God.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The author explains that this poem is his personal conviction. It is profound. The words carefully convey the general concept of how man stands before God.
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The author explains that this poem is his personal conviction. It is profound. The words carefully convey the general concept of how man stands before God.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
Comment from MAMONIA
This is very deep and personal, yet I find it very consoling.
Only God knows our sin, therefore, He would be the one to
forgive.
Very interesting work you have here.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
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This is very deep and personal, yet I find it very consoling.
Only God knows our sin, therefore, He would be the one to
forgive.
Very interesting work you have here.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
It is amazing to think, God knows us intimately, inside and out. He knows our everything thought before we think it; our every word before we say it; our every action before we make it. It is also interesting to think we are made in His image. No one understands us as He does. You have made a very clear and concise point. Great work. Great illustration.
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It is amazing to think, God knows us intimately, inside and out. He knows our everything thought before we think it; our every word before we say it; our every action before we make it. It is also interesting to think we are made in His image. No one understands us as He does. You have made a very clear and concise point. Great work. Great illustration.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
God is the Almighty. Jesus will forgive you for your sin, it's why he died, and he still loves you/me very much. Every kind of sin and slander can be forgiven, but profane talk against the Spirit will not be forgiven.
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God is the Almighty. Jesus will forgive you for your sin, it's why he died, and he still loves you/me very much. Every kind of sin and slander can be forgiven, but profane talk against the Spirit will not be forgiven.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A very interesting poem and view on religion and hope. An excellent write. Always enjoy your work always thought provoking well done! kindest regards meia xx
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A very interesting poem and view on religion and hope. An excellent write. Always enjoy your work always thought provoking well done! kindest regards meia xx
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
Comment from Jill McCauslin
Interesting poem. Nicely done. I think there are a couple of things you might consider. In the third line you don't really need the word Do. I know you need it for an acrostic purpose but it really doesn't add anything to the poem. Also, you don't need the comma after God. Two small things. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading it.
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Interesting poem. Nicely done. I think there are a couple of things you might consider. In the third line you don't really need the word Do. I know you need it for an acrostic purpose but it really doesn't add anything to the poem. Also, you don't need the comma after God. Two small things. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
People are taught that God is the only wise and just God who judges His people according to the way they judge one another. If you judge others, and practice the same things, you will not escape the judgement of God. Your poem expresses it perfectly, "God does His justice." Well done.
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People are taught that God is the only wise and just God who judges His people according to the way they judge one another. If you judge others, and practice the same things, you will not escape the judgement of God. Your poem expresses it perfectly, "God does His justice." Well done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
Comment from Dilettante junior
Good job. You did it again. Your signature style I will call it. Very bold. Very witty. It bears the ugly truth as well. Man thinks he can do as he pleases forgetting God is watching over him all along. Bravo!
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Good job. You did it again. Your signature style I will call it. Very bold. Very witty. It bears the ugly truth as well. Man thinks he can do as he pleases forgetting God is watching over him all along. Bravo!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
Comment from Marigo J. Stathis
Love the words and message! In a minimalistic way, you succeed in relaying a BIG message. However, I'm not sure you need to embolden the first word of every line. That's just my humble opinion. Overall, though: well done! :)
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Love the words and message! In a minimalistic way, you succeed in relaying a BIG message. However, I'm not sure you need to embolden the first word of every line. That's just my humble opinion. Overall, though: well done! :)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
