Comment from donette1914

Excellent

your experience shows and adorable photo
simply outstanding!
very cleaver words to make this come to life
very believable and thought out
thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading,
and reviewing.

Doug

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Very well done. I'm not a poet so I don't know the poem rules, but I do know what I like. A lovely tribute to your daughter, I believe. Have you tried to get paid for your work on the writing market? Lightning does strike occasionally.




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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Smiling. Very nice of you to even consider such. I appreciate it.

Thank you.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

So beautiful, your thoughts, your words, your poetic expression, her photo. All of them. Hard to be a father! She has probably chosen some-one just like her Dad - the ultimate tribute. Very well written.

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Well, that was very nice of you.
I thank you.

Doug