Her Dawn
perhaps my speech63 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very nice wedding poem. I am sure that her husband is a lucky man, as you were lucky to have her as a daughter - that shines through the poem. Iike how the poem ends
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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very nice wedding poem. I am sure that her husband is a lucky man, as you were lucky to have her as a daughter - that shines through the poem. Iike how the poem ends
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you, sir.
Comment from Vanna1
Emotional piece. Passing the torch she shall light her own way. Yes, good metaphor. Cute picture of daddy's little girl. Not so little anymore! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Emotional piece. Passing the torch she shall light her own way. Yes, good metaphor. Cute picture of daddy's little girl. Not so little anymore! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Very true.
Thank you
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Very cute picture. The poem says:"Now, she chooses her path, A path
she brightens for you both."
What people can do is to give their children education both at home and at school. When they grow up, leave them to choose their own path.
Happy writing.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Very cute picture. The poem says:"Now, she chooses her path, A path
she brightens for you both."
What people can do is to give their children education both at home and at school. When they grow up, leave them to choose their own path.
Happy writing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
A beautiful poem about your daughter and how they capture your heart and then grow up to be on their own.
Makes a papa proud, I'm sure! God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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A beautiful poem about your daughter and how they capture your heart and then grow up to be on their own.
Makes a papa proud, I'm sure! God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Yes.
Thank you,
Doug
Comment from royowen
I'm so proud of my girls, although I love them as they are, without condition, they have made wonderful decisions, living off reflected glory, is the one right that remains, and adore my grands, well done Great post, I relate entirely, well done, Doug, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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I'm so proud of my girls, although I love them as they are, without condition, they have made wonderful decisions, living off reflected glory, is the one right that remains, and adore my grands, well done Great post, I relate entirely, well done, Doug, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Smiling.
Roy, i'm sure you
understand.
Thank you my friend,
Doug
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It?s wonderful
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Poignant and heartwarming--I see your notes--brilliant idea--"without me and with you" nails the theme--when's the wedding?! Pitch this piece to Hallmark--you have a winner here!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Poignant and heartwarming--I see your notes--brilliant idea--"without me and with you" nails the theme--when's the wedding?! Pitch this piece to Hallmark--you have a winner here!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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You think so?
Maybe I will.
Thaank you,
Doug
Comment from LJbutterfly
This beautifully written poem really touched my heart. My husband and I have one grown daughter who was a Daddy's girl. It was great watching her grow up, but difficult when she was ready to fly. "And so the torch passes and walks without me, but with you." This is beautiful.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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This beautifully written poem really touched my heart. My husband and I have one grown daughter who was a Daddy's girl. It was great watching her grow up, but difficult when she was ready to fly. "And so the torch passes and walks without me, but with you." This is beautiful.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
I see you both
really do
understand.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Her Dawn', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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'Her Dawn', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Awe, thank you, my Lady.
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Awe, you welcome , kind Sir.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I know this moment comes to any dad's life, when he gives away his daughter to another man, he shares a daughter and wins a son. thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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I know this moment comes to any dad's life, when he gives away his daughter to another man, he shares a daughter and wins a son. thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you, dear.
Comment from Raul1
It was fun reading your poem. A beautiful picture of the baby. You're right times have changed and we all grow up fast. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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It was fun reading your poem. A beautiful picture of the baby. You're right times have changed and we all grow up fast. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading me,
and your reply.
Doug
