Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is a wonderful speech, I would have been proud to hear my my mom or dad say it. It simply shows the love you have for your daughter and how much you wish the best for her. :) Nicely done. :)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Smiling, thank you.

Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

How beautiful, Doug. I love this line: the torch passes and walks
without me, but with you. It actually brought tears to my eyes. And that's an adorable picture of your daughter.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

I worked on that line a bit.
When it bothers me to read,
I stop.

Thank you,

Doug

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

i love that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you get a 6 star review really really nice job i love it and that picture is funny did you read the kids shirt? but anyways keep writing and stay safe

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Ha ha. Thank you.

PS-I did read the shirt.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Aw, that will make her eye make-up run, so be careful! That was so lovely, Victor, it will make a lovely speech and have all the ladies reaching for their handkerchiefs. Is it soon? Enjoy with the day. Warm hugs, Sandra xx

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thank you, Sandra.

Comment from Reese Turner

Excellent

A most relevant poem for me this day as my wife has filled up the dining room table and another brought in with old pictures. From our dating in New York thru our life in Texas and vacations around America and beyond with our three angels. It is a great visit to great times, but, as you know, reminders of what once was "my little girl" but is no more are bitter-sweet. Enjoyed it!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thank you, Reese.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Ah! Such a heartfelt rendering from a father to his beloved daughter. Such a special relationship that I treasured with my own father and our daughter treasures with her dad/my husband ...
I appreciate the simplicity of your words/offering.
Your daughter is one lucky lady ...

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Diane, so glad you read this.

Thank you,

Doug

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

Awww, your sweet little girl is getting married? Congratulations, and good luck to her. I know it's hard. Giving your daughter to another man is difficult, but know she will always look to you as her first love.

Great job, my friend,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

You're the besst.

Thank you,

Doug

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hello Victor, this is a very sweet poem about your daughter. Gorgeous picture of the sweetie. If she is about to marry then your poem is perfect - just right! A perfect message from a proud father. Just lovely - warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thank you, Dorothy.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This sounds like a father missing his daughter now that she has gotten married. He is hoping that the husband will love her and like her changes as much as he did.
Keep writing and stay healthly.
Joan

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thank you, Joan.

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jan-2021

You're welcome, Doug.
Joan

Comment from RPSaxena

Excellent

Hello Victortouch,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme - A father's love to his daughter on her getting married, and going away from him. It's my opinion.
May God fulfill your hope! Amen.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Smiling.

Thank you.

reply by RPSaxena on 27-Jan-2021

Victottouche, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP