Eyes
They tell so much4 total reviews
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
I really like this one. For me, so often these short poems fall short of really conveying an entire thought, but this captures the way I also feel about emotion in one's eyes perfectly. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
I really like this one. For me, so often these short poems fall short of really conveying an entire thought, but this captures the way I also feel about emotion in one's eyes perfectly. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the great revue.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-10-2, Eyes, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the eyes are the windows to the soul that we may peer within.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
This 2-10-2, Eyes, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the eyes are the windows to the soul that we may peer within.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Carol Clark2
This 2-10-2 poem is well done. A very true statement. I like the reflected colors on the white of the eye in the artwork, as the eyes themselves reflect the emotions of the person. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
This 2-10-2 poem is well done. A very true statement. I like the reflected colors on the white of the eye in the artwork, as the eyes themselves reflect the emotions of the person. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Many thanks Carol
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You're welcome.
Comment from Susan Newell
Very clever and oh so true. I wondered how an "ed" was handled with regard to syllable count and whether or not one had to substitute a poetic T. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
Very clever and oh so true. I wondered how an "ed" was handled with regard to syllable count and whether or not one had to substitute a poetic T. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Many thanks Susan
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You are indeed welcome.