Renga Two
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Memorial
by Bill Pinder
Hello, Bill,
Great job with your renga chapter. I learned a new word..cairn. Good syllable count. The format is a couplet... two lines of 7/7 syllables.
I like the presentation too. Thank you for adding the ranga rules. Well done!
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Memorial
by Bill Pinder
Hello, Bill,
Great job with your renga chapter. I learned a new word..cairn. Good syllable count. The format is a couplet... two lines of 7/7 syllables.
I like the presentation too. Thank you for adding the ranga rules. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
Comment from Gloria ....
This is really good, Bill. And yes to place our stones for the long haul the work should be done with careful hands.
Excellent addition to Gypsy's Renga book which leaves lots of room to explore in the following haiku.
Excellent!
Gloria
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This is really good, Bill. And yes to place our stones for the long haul the work should be done with careful hands.
Excellent addition to Gypsy's Renga book which leaves lots of room to explore in the following haiku.
Excellent!
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
Comment from judiverse
Beautifully expressed in two lines. There must be many poems in this collection by now. I love the thought about memories weathering well. Nice sound, and a reminder that we need to be care of what memories we make, if they are going to stay with us. judi
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Beautifully expressed in two lines. There must be many poems in this collection by now. I love the thought about memories weathering well. Nice sound, and a reminder that we need to be care of what memories we make, if they are going to stay with us. judi
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Truthfully, since I know little about poetry forms, I look for the emotion and read. This is just a beautiful well said write. memories, like stone must weather well.
Thank you for the read.
Regards,
Mary
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Truthfully, since I know little about poetry forms, I look for the emotion and read. This is just a beautiful well said write. memories, like stone must weather well.
Thank you for the read.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
These Renga poems are so truly stated, firstly, cairns should be built carefully and secondly, memories should get weather well; nicely said, well done; thanks for sharing these. ALCREATOR
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These Renga poems are so truly stated, firstly, cairns should be built carefully and secondly, memories should get weather well; nicely said, well done; thanks for sharing these. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021