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Comment from greyson ernst
this is really impressive really really nice job the also makes a lot of sense its perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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this is really impressive really really nice job the also makes a lot of sense its perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much Grayson for your wonderful time and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from moonsunrise
Your beautifully written short story "The Pebbles in My Hand" brought tears of joy, pain, sorrow and beauty to my heart and eyes (your selected image). Then at the end I read of your experiences. I am so so sorry for your losses. I loss of my nephew (who was like a son to me) to suicide 2 years ago this May. This will always be painful to me and my family. We had no idea he was depressed. My only consolation is that I trust that he is no longer suffering and is up in heaven with our Lord. I talk to him every day. I feel his spirit so much within me.
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful short story.
God bless you always.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Your beautifully written short story "The Pebbles in My Hand" brought tears of joy, pain, sorrow and beauty to my heart and eyes (your selected image). Then at the end I read of your experiences. I am so so sorry for your losses. I loss of my nephew (who was like a son to me) to suicide 2 years ago this May. This will always be painful to me and my family. We had no idea he was depressed. My only consolation is that I trust that he is no longer suffering and is up in heaven with our Lord. I talk to him every day. I feel his spirit so much within me.
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful short story.
God bless you always.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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My deepest condolences on your nephew.
The loss of a child.
Don't matter the age.
The race.
Whether it's male or female. Is a parent's worst nightmare.
Thanks for your time and consideration and sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024