Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Poets Desires"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from Wendy G
Yes, you have condensed why we write. It is for our own need and urge to write but it is also to influence others, to cause them to gasp in wonder, delight, or sadness - or to make them smile.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Yes, you have condensed why we write. It is for our own need and urge to write but it is also to influence others, to cause them to gasp in wonder, delight, or sadness - or to make them smile.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Wendy, sending you smiles back, thank you!
Comment from LJbutterfly
In just a few words, you have expressed every poet's dream...to write a piece that will have a lasting effect on readers. I am not a poet, but would like my fiction to entertain or educate, and be remembered. I wish you the very best in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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In just a few words, you have expressed every poet's dream...to write a piece that will have a lasting effect on readers. I am not a poet, but would like my fiction to entertain or educate, and be remembered. I wish you the very best in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you, smiles are infectious.
Comment from l.raven
HI JLR, this is truly a winner my sweet friend...
something we all want when our writings are read...
but can never be sure...
I sooooo love this poem...and love the picture...very well thought of...and very well written...love Linda xxoo...good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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HI JLR, this is truly a winner my sweet friend...
something we all want when our writings are read...
but can never be sure...
I sooooo love this poem...and love the picture...very well thought of...and very well written...love Linda xxoo...good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Linda, thanks for the good wishes and warm comments.
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your soooooo very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from patcelaw
It is true we never know who might see and read our work. Who will smile or be encouraged by the the messages we write.
Patricia
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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It is true we never know who might see and read our work. Who will smile or be encouraged by the the messages we write.
Patricia
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Patrica, yes smiles....they are infectious, so write and write and write some more!
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Poet's Desires, has the proper formatting and sends out the verse to be read by who-knows-who. The who may not matter, as much as the sending and the reading.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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This four-line poem, Poet's Desires, has the proper formatting and sends out the verse to be read by who-knows-who. The who may not matter, as much as the sending and the reading.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thanks very much Bill!
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of the 1-5-5-9 form and what a unique formatting of the poem. The theme is perfect for a site for writers as you show use our deepest hope in writing is to connect with the readers' souls. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Great use of the 1-5-5-9 form and what a unique formatting of the poem. The theme is perfect for a site for writers as you show use our deepest hope in writing is to connect with the readers' souls. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
Yes isn't that the great reach of poetry/writing - who can ever tell the impact, for good or ill, that words may have - it's an awe- inspiring thought -
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Yes isn't that the great reach of poetry/writing - who can ever tell the impact, for good or ill, that words may have - it's an awe- inspiring thought -
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Yes, smiling back
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Great entry for the four-line poem contest! "One knows not whose eyes will consume these words." Perfect. Certainly, some souls will smile! Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Great entry for the four-line poem contest! "One knows not whose eyes will consume these words." Perfect. Certainly, some souls will smile! Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four line poem about being a poet cannot always guarantee everyone will be happy about what we offer, but there will always be someone who can spare a smile when reading our work.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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A very well-written four line poem about being a poet cannot always guarantee everyone will be happy about what we offer, but there will always be someone who can spare a smile when reading our work.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you sending a smile back!
Comment from donette1914
so talented
your experience shows
very cleaver words to make this come to life
very believable and thought out
thank you for sharing
I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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so talented
your experience shows
very cleaver words to make this come to life
very believable and thought out
thank you for sharing
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Donette, sending a smile back.