Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Preparation...preparation....just getting ready for the pounce. Just hoping that all the pieces fall into place and they get to Tania in time. As for Colin, can I help beat him? LOL

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2021

Comment from DeboraDyess

Excellent

Caught up (again!)

~ you used 'mates' twice in as many paragraphs. Might change the second to 'friends' or 'cohorts'. I love 'mates' but it is repetitive.
~with short, almost robotic, jerks, >> Okay, I'm no comma queen and I havn'et gotten my certification for editing yet, but is the second comma needed? It seems distracting to me. I ought to go take a peek at the rules, but it's late and I'm bone-weary. lol. Just thought I'd ask.

So...You're writing the next chapter right now, right? lol. Loving this!
Blessings. Have a great Wednesday!
Debs

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021

No, you haven't caught up! There is one more, part 19, waiting in the wings, still paying until tomorrow!! And then part 20 comes on Sunday. Then you will have caught up. Lol.
I'm taking your advice on board and will go and change the one of the mates. I hadn't noticed that, and I'll take another look at that comma. I'm not a comma queen, either. :) Thank you, my friend, for another of your lovely reviews. Warm hugs again. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

You have realistically conveyed the extend of Tania's inujries and torture she is going through .I hope grant's plan will succeed .Colin has tied her legs ,so now she cant do anything else.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021

Aw, that's so nice of you to say that, Sanku. You've put a big smile on my face. Grant and his men will be going in next, that will be fun! Lol. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) SAndra xx

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Sandra so Tania still hasnt told colin her password I wonder how he will get her to tell him
More suspense and drama with her now tied up
cheers Chris

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021

Hi again, Chris, no, she hasn't given him her password to get the rest of her work. I've just left a short synopsis on part 19 for you, I think you missed part 10 and 11 which explains things. Thanks again for reading my story, and for your continued support, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx

reply by Chrissy710 on 01-Feb-2021

Hi Sandra I must reread them I read them a while ago and have been following the story It must have Slipped my mind

Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

So often these scenes of violence are followed up by a remarkable recovery. You have made the situation real by showing the extent of Tania's injuries and their effect on her. The fact that she needs medical aid ups the ante. Time is of the essence.
Grant, too, is made believable by the way he recognises and uses the skills of those around him. Let's hope Lorna comes up with a good idea.
Your narrative runs smoothly, the tension remains high, and I feel empathy for your characters. They are carefully individualised, each with their own strengths and weaknesses.
Looking forward to the next part.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021

What a lovely review, Tony, thank you so much. Tomorrow's posting sees things moving faster. I'm struggling with a chapter a bit further on, which must be believeable to work. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying this story, it's way out of my comfort zone, but isn't that what we do? Thank you for the golden star, my friend, you have started my day with a smile. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx

Comment from dmt1967

Exceptional

This is another great chapter. I really like how this book is developing. Are you branching out into Adult books now? If so, that is so cool. It takes a talented writer to do both lol. I wrote a kids story once. It took so much out of me, I swore, never again. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021

Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, my friend!!
I seem to go from tiny tots, to toddlers, to my teenage grandson, and adults and back again! lol. I do like a change now and again. I wrote my first adult books on here starting in 2017 with my time-travel trilogy. Two women were the protagonists all the way through. Then I wrote four books for my grandson, rather more science fiction. Before all that, I wrote loads of children's stories and poem/stories. One day I'll settle down and concentrate on one genre ... or not! This book is way out of my normal writing zone, but it's fun. Thank you for being such an encouraging friend. WArm hugs, :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Torturous! You certainly convey her agony in graphic detail. Trying to set her broken arm--I've heard that process is excruciating--I can see her biting through her tongue. Please, get her out ASAP.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021

Grant is sorting it, lol. Thank you so much, Liz, things will be happening fast now. Thank you so much, my friend, for this lovely review. Warm hugs! :)) Sandra xx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

A perfect chapter, Sandra. Just enough tension, and a very believable response from Tania as she assesses her injuries. I'm glad Grant is sorting out Monica's security as well - who knows what that tow rag might do if he's desperate. I can't wait to read on!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thank you so much, ALexis, for your really lovely review, and for the gift of all those beautiful stars. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my book. Warmest, hugs my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I have to admit, I really like your story. I sure hope Grant finds his mystery friend, Tania. For not knowing her before, only through his brother and her blueprints, I hope he does apologize to her as he thought she was a thief.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

I think you will like where this story is going to end up. The main story begins soon. Thank you, my friend, what can I say, your reviews, your encouragement, everything, you've been great. Warmest hugs. (You'll suffocate soon!!) xxxx

Comment from rspoet

Exceptional

Hello Sandra,
This is an excellent chapter setting up the first encounter with Colin.
It seems much depends upon a question about the plans to make Colin go back to see Tania, and no one has any idea what that question is.
Lorna to the rescue. Maybe she should be in charge. (like Miss Marple)
Obviously, Colin is way past the point letting Tania go. He'll have to get rid of her, murder me thinks.
The SAS trio better be as good as Grant suggests.
Well done, my friend.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thank you so very much for the six stars, Robert, and the lovely review. Well, I've almost finished the prologue, :)) the real story starts in three parts time! LOL Warm hugs, my dear friend. xx Sandra xx