The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 83 "Breathe"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I exercise on my exercise bike. Sometimes I average losing a few calories and then if I go a few more miles, its over my goal. Wow! I know how you feel, soon we will be able to go outside and get some fresh air walking.
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I exercise on my exercise bike. Sometimes I average losing a few calories and then if I go a few more miles, its over my goal. Wow! I know how you feel, soon we will be able to go outside and get some fresh air walking.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I heard something about in California if you even walk around your yard you must wear your mask. Here in Texas you can walk outside, as long as you're social distancing without a mask.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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I heard something about in California if you even walk around your yard you must wear your mask. Here in Texas you can walk outside, as long as you're social distancing without a mask.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Now become mandatory indoors too:(
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading and reviewing your informative post, Iza. What you described probably has befallen on many. It is great to get out in the fresh air--esp after being cooped uo for so long.
May I suggest ~
that had the same idea, so[ it became overcrowded . . . ] become overcrowded and not fun
. . .fooling myself that I can [ could ] do . . .
Take care.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I enjoyed reading and reviewing your informative post, Iza. What you described probably has befallen on many. It is great to get out in the fresh air--esp after being cooped uo for so long.
May I suggest ~
that had the same idea, so[ it became overcrowded . . . ] become overcrowded and not fun
. . .fooling myself that I can [ could ] do . . .
Take care.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much Jan for your support with this piece and the grammar corrections.
Comment from Susan Larson
I think we all, including us introverts, are being affected by this pandemic. Our yoga class was cancelled because our instructor is 77 years old and her husband insisted she quit. I hope the benefits of being married are keeping her in shape.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I think we all, including us introverts, are being affected by this pandemic. Our yoga class was cancelled because our instructor is 77 years old and her husband insisted she quit. I hope the benefits of being married are keeping her in shape.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Your line made me laugh:) no hokey-pokey is not safe from Coronella
Comment from royowen
I guess we all have an excuse for being out of shape, with Covid around the place, then we all have a very good excuse to avoid the gym. Beautifully written Iza, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Typo : Then I (realize) realise?
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I guess we all have an excuse for being out of shape, with Covid around the place, then we all have a very good excuse to avoid the gym. Beautifully written Iza, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Typo : Then I (realize) realise?
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing my complains:)
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Most welcome
Comment from estory
The list of frustrations goes on and on through the pandemic. We can't even exercise because the halls of the building are full of people with the same idea. There's nothing but marriage for exercise. I liked the part when you sneeze and think its corona. nothing but the usual panic attack. We are all a little jumpy today about the coughs and sneezes. estory
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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The list of frustrations goes on and on through the pandemic. We can't even exercise because the halls of the building are full of people with the same idea. There's nothing but marriage for exercise. I liked the part when you sneeze and think its corona. nothing but the usual panic attack. We are all a little jumpy today about the coughs and sneezes. estory
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you:)
Comment from DSchlosser
I may have to go through some of the previous chapters of this book to read of some of the other experiences. I remember ready part of this book, but it doesn't pop up much.
I found a few instances that would need some punctuation changes.
"Today I went to the library, and I felt like"- I would put a comma after Today.
"My legs were shaking, I guess the walk from my improvised office to the fridge and bathroom, couldn't qualify for quality walking."- I would would a semi-colon after shaking and remove the comma after bathroom.
"idea, so become overcrowded and not fun anymore." - I think here you'd want to change "become" to "it became." The tense sounds better.
"I had a couple of two weeks when I dragged myself to the swimming pool"- I would reword this sentence to say something like, "For two weeks one year, I dragged myself to a swimming pool."
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I may have to go through some of the previous chapters of this book to read of some of the other experiences. I remember ready part of this book, but it doesn't pop up much.
I found a few instances that would need some punctuation changes.
"Today I went to the library, and I felt like"- I would put a comma after Today.
"My legs were shaking, I guess the walk from my improvised office to the fridge and bathroom, couldn't qualify for quality walking."- I would would a semi-colon after shaking and remove the comma after bathroom.
"idea, so become overcrowded and not fun anymore." - I think here you'd want to change "become" to "it became." The tense sounds better.
"I had a couple of two weeks when I dragged myself to the swimming pool"- I would reword this sentence to say something like, "For two weeks one year, I dragged myself to a swimming pool."
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for all your suggestions they are greatly appreciated:)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Well
Written.I agree myself included have been inactive since Covid. Basically nowhere to go I used to go to the gym and miss it. And it shows. Hopefully life soon gets back somehow to the way it was. With Covid there's lots of free willie figures around ð???well done I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Well
Written.I agree myself included have been inactive since Covid. Basically nowhere to go I used to go to the gym and miss it. And it shows. Hopefully life soon gets back somehow to the way it was. With Covid there's lots of free willie figures around ð???well done I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for stopping by and giving a chance to this piece:)
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Ah yes, what are they calling it...the COVID 25! :) I'm a hiker but in the past year haven't gone out much, the trails and parks are now way overcrowded from those who decided to take up the sport! Still, that is only an excuse as there are other options. Your story definitely rings true though, of the extent of our days being from the laptop, to fridge, bathroom and bed! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Ah yes, what are they calling it...the COVID 25! :) I'm a hiker but in the past year haven't gone out much, the trails and parks are now way overcrowded from those who decided to take up the sport! Still, that is only an excuse as there are other options. Your story definitely rings true though, of the extent of our days being from the laptop, to fridge, bathroom and bed! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your generous review and the lovely stars.
Comment from rjuselius
Hahaha. Lol. This is an entertaining piece of prose dear anonymous! Indeed, I can relate cos I have gained around 6 kilos during this year.
Thank you for sharing a laughter!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Hahaha. Lol. This is an entertaining piece of prose dear anonymous! Indeed, I can relate cos I have gained around 6 kilos during this year.
Thank you for sharing a laughter!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your generous review and the lovely stars.
