Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Why do I have a feeling that he's going to mess it up. I honestly believe he will and then have to worried about remaining a live. LOL I am enjoying this.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

He passed day one:) Dispute 11 is ready to go:)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, he can add all those qualities IF he live. I enjoyed your script, Iza. I got the gist of the foreign words so there was no problem with them. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

I am very grateful for your takigng a chance on this script:)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yet another adventure with two people in one body, Evil Me and Me, matching wits, but getting very little, Judy an hilarious post. Well done Iza, blessings Roy
Typo :: On hundred (in) sixty. And?

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Satire Script describes, three roles playing by the same or one character, how sad the drama - the dispute ends ironically; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for your kind review.

Comment from Aaqib Naeem

Excellent

The image you chose instantly cracked me up. Its hilarious! The script itself is indeed fun and refreshing. That argument between a person and their inner self, both being opposites work well here as well. I do not understand russian so I simply googled those parts to know what they meant. Haha, and what shady job that person signed up for. Its certainly great pay if one is broke but damn, going from broke to working for the mafia in a jiffy.
A good, well-written script that I would love to check out the continuation for. Have a good day :-)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thank you for checking this piece up and the continuation it's up and ready.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Snide n snarky banter--hilarious!

There is only one actor who plays all the characters.=>
One actor plays BOTH characters.

I am taking the package and PUTTING IT on the metal shelf and CLOSING the door.

Then turning to the side, this will be the best job ever. WHAT DO YOU MEAN?

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thank you, Liz:) and I meant talking to himself

reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 23-Jan-2021

I know he's talking to himself--what I mean is when there are only two parts say BOTH vs ALL (three or more)

reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 23-Jan-2021

do you mean (turning to the audience) he says THIS WILL BE THE BEST JOB EVER? If so, use ( ) per above

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You come up with the funniest pictures for this script. My one concern is only some of us who speak Russian will be able to understand your dialogue.
This Gamlet is a resume-writing genius! Lol.
Suggestions:
Okay, the word code (code word)
putted on the metal shelf (put it)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

You know my Russian as any other language that I pretend I know:) is fake:) so please forgive me, my fake Russian:)

reply by lyenochka on 23-Jan-2021

I could totally understand it!