Opposite Dimension
He is not like me.11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Opposite Day writing prompt contest. your poem embodies the opposite of your personality or values.
I like the troublesome self from another dimension concept. :)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Opposite Day writing prompt contest. your poem embodies the opposite of your personality or values.
I like the troublesome self from another dimension concept. :)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thanks! I hope I win. Thanks for the good luck!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the opposite personality that is connected to you. We hide it forces long as we possibly can but sometimes something pokes him to come out.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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A very well-written poem about the opposite personality that is connected to you. We hide it forces long as we possibly can but sometimes something pokes him to come out.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from victor 66
I think your poem is most interesting in the fact that I believe we have at least several personalities in our make up. Being 73 years old, I can't tell you how many things I would've liked to have corrected and how many peoples' feelings even unintentionally, I hurt. I don't believe being sorry is enough. And though most people think I'm a reasonable person, in reality I have my doubts. I know your poem was d in humo[Site "Chess.com iPhone"]
[Date "11/18/2020 04:26PM"]
[White "White (0)"]
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1.b3 but there is a certain amount of truth in it as well. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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I think your poem is most interesting in the fact that I believe we have at least several personalities in our make up. Being 73 years old, I can't tell you how many things I would've liked to have corrected and how many peoples' feelings even unintentionally, I hurt. I don't believe being sorry is enough. And though most people think I'm a reasonable person, in reality I have my doubts. I know your poem was d in humo[Site "Chess.com iPhone"]
[Date "11/18/2020 04:26PM"]
[White "White (0)"]
[Black "Black (0)"]
1.b3 but there is a certain amount of truth in it as well. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Opposite Dimension", is a well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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'Opposite Dimension", is a well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
You're welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
This is a fun poem and perfectly illustrated! Great entry for this Opposite Day contest. I like that you put the opposite "you" in another dimension like in sci-fi stories. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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This is a fun poem and perfectly illustrated! Great entry for this Opposite Day contest. I like that you put the opposite "you" in another dimension like in sci-fi stories. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from DonandVicki
The poem is written in satire, at least that was my take on it. There are times when I feel just as you described in your poem. We all wear a mask at times.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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The poem is written in satire, at least that was my take on it. There are times when I feel just as you described in your poem. We all wear a mask at times.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Yes, you're right it is funny.
Comment from equestrik
This is a good write for the opposite contest. I love that by writing this you reveal that you are a good, kind and upstanding guy. Very nice with a good picture as well.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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This is a good write for the opposite contest. I love that by writing this you reveal that you are a good, kind and upstanding guy. Very nice with a good picture as well.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your approach to the prompt topic is clever and thought-provoking. Actually, we all have more than one side. You have used specific details to convey your message about the nice side taking the forefront.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Your approach to the prompt topic is clever and thought-provoking. Actually, we all have more than one side. You have used specific details to convey your message about the nice side taking the forefront.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like the picture you have chosen to illustrate what you are not. This is a good description of the person you don't ever want to be: "He hates my image and my personality, he is mean, he's also a jerk." Very well done
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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I like the picture you have chosen to illustrate what you are not. This is a good description of the person you don't ever want to be: "He hates my image and my personality, he is mean, he's also a jerk." Very well done
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thanks!
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You are welcome
Comment from Rosalie Lawrence
Your submission allowed me to question whether it would it be a good thing to have another personality to blame one's bad qualities and behaviors on? And would the opposite also apply, would "it" get the credit for all or some of the good qualities.
I question some of your syntax and grammar - I expect this was written quickly - or by the jerk - who wanted to enter a contest without putting in too much time.
Either way, it was fun to read and I hope you two had fun writing it. I mean, "I feel a copy of I?" Didn't you mean- Me? or myself?" Write on!
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Your submission allowed me to question whether it would it be a good thing to have another personality to blame one's bad qualities and behaviors on? And would the opposite also apply, would "it" get the credit for all or some of the good qualities.
I question some of your syntax and grammar - I expect this was written quickly - or by the jerk - who wanted to enter a contest without putting in too much time.
Either way, it was fun to read and I hope you two had fun writing it. I mean, "I feel a copy of I?" Didn't you mean- Me? or myself?" Write on!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thanks!
