Comment from Goodadvicechan

Good

This is a good piece to describe the feeling and the scene of wanting a drink...I believe I had similar experience in the past. Now I may be among the first group get one.

The picture is good. I am tempted to have one drink too.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Enjoy your drink.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Mmm, how I miss one of those tours, I am glad you are enjoying one of those. 'She looked at it and licked her lips, her mouth watering a little. She wanted to walk over, snatch it up, and gulp it down." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thank you. I always appreciate your reviewing of my work.

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This is certainly a clear description of a person dealing with an addiction or at least, a temptation they know they should resist. The images are clearly painted with just the right details. I could see the scene and feel the struggle within the tempted one. Very well done. I wish you luck in this contest, anonymous writer. MM

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021

Thank you!