Diamonds of Distraction
A glittery one for Fantasticated Friday29 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
On a clear night I see these diamonds in the sky, some of them are satellites and some are stars, I used to see planes in the sky at night with their flashing lights, but not anymore, they are grounded. This is an ambient write Sally, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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On a clear night I see these diamonds in the sky, some of them are satellites and some are stars, I used to see planes in the sky at night with their flashing lights, but not anymore, they are grounded. This is an ambient write Sally, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and appreciation of stars in the velvet night. They do look like diamonds! Sending blessings your way,
Sal, XOs.....
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
There is almost something comforting about wishing upon a star for something you want. Maybe it's the nostalgic feeling from being a kid and wishing on a star. It certainly can be awe inspiring see all the diamonds of distraction as well. Great job.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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There is almost something comforting about wishing upon a star for something you want. Maybe it's the nostalgic feeling from being a kid and wishing on a star. It certainly can be awe inspiring see all the diamonds of distraction as well. Great job.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my poem. I felt like a child again writing this poem and singing along with this song! Sending along my starry best,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A beautifully worded poem expressing a dream in a few words. I can imagine the scene and the atmospherics. The picture of the young girl makes a perfect backdrop. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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A beautifully worded poem expressing a dream in a few words. I can imagine the scene and the atmospherics. The picture of the young girl makes a perfect backdrop. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Sal :))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This short contest entry is very romantic. As you know I love romance. You poem shares an emotion with us that I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the best with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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This short contest entry is very romantic. As you know I love romance. You poem shares an emotion with us that I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the best with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my romance poem. Sending you my starry best wishes,
Sal XOs....
Comment from fm wright
A wonderful entry for the three line poetry contest. I really like the pjhrase diamond studded velvet. Both the picture and video are perfect matches for your words.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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A wonderful entry for the three line poetry contest. I really like the pjhrase diamond studded velvet. Both the picture and video are perfect matches for your words.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, Faye dear. Both mean so much to me. Blessings always,
Sal XOs...xo....
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You are most welcome. Blessings back to you, my dear friend.
Comment from Mary Jane Y
Beautiful picture which adds to the meaning of your poem. That kind of starry night could distract anyone's thinking. Would have a lot of wishes with that many stars. Hope you do well with this.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Beautiful picture which adds to the meaning of your poem. That kind of starry night could distract anyone's thinking. Would have a lot of wishes with that many stars. Hope you do well with this.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Mary Jane. It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Sally,
This 5-7-5 poem is very good. I can envision sparkling diamonds on a backdrop of purple sky. The photo goes really well with your words.
Excellent work, Sally,
Blessings,
Hugs,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Sally,
This 5-7-5 poem is very good. I can envision sparkling diamonds on a backdrop of purple sky. The photo goes really well with your words.
Excellent work, Sally,
Blessings,
Hugs,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Aw, thank you, dear Cindy. I'm so glad we share this love of the starry sky. Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from pome lover
lovely! and I also loved that part in the movie, Pinocchio - that song. full of hope.
That's also a pretty picture of the girl and the star-studded sky.
A most pleasing total effect.
pome lover
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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lovely! and I also loved that part in the movie, Pinocchio - that song. full of hope.
That's also a pretty picture of the girl and the star-studded sky.
A most pleasing total effect.
pome lover
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review, dear Katherine. Good to see you under star-studded skies,
Sal XOs....
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you two (in your picture) look so happy. It always makes me smile.
Comment from Debra White
Hello Sal :)
This is lovely.
The imagery....Wow! Diamond studded velvet - now that's a beautiful night sky if ever I read one!
I enjoy the alliteration in diamond/distracted. I also love the romantic whimsy of your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Hello Sal :)
This is lovely.
The imagery....Wow! Diamond studded velvet - now that's a beautiful night sky if ever I read one!
I enjoy the alliteration in diamond/distracted. I also love the romantic whimsy of your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Debra. I really appreciate your kind words,
Sal XOs....
