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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
This hilarious battle of (half-n-half-)wits continues!
only one actor who plays all=>BOTH the characters.
me runs to see=>I RUN--unless you intend humor
no sing of=>no sign of
You ARE supposed to be done at 4 pm.
they send=SENT me home early
I drunk=>DRANK all their coffee and eat=>ATE all their cookies. How should I know that they were just BEING polite, and THAT I WAS supposed to say
introduced myself and TALKED about
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This hilarious battle of (half-n-half-)wits continues!
only one actor who plays all=>BOTH the characters.
me runs to see=>I RUN--unless you intend humor
no sing of=>no sign of
You ARE supposed to be done at 4 pm.
they send=SENT me home early
I drunk=>DRANK all their coffee and eat=>ATE all their cookies. How should I know that they were just BEING polite, and THAT I WAS supposed to say
introduced myself and TALKED about
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from estory
This made me chuckle. I like the little Russian bit at the end, that was hilarious. I thought this was well concieved and orchestrated. I like what the evil me learns in the few hours at the new job, how not to eat all the cookies, open the doors for the customers, don't empty the tip bank until the end of the day. That was precious. estory
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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This made me chuckle. I like the little Russian bit at the end, that was hilarious. I thought this was well concieved and orchestrated. I like what the evil me learns in the few hours at the new job, how not to eat all the cookies, open the doors for the customers, don't empty the tip bank until the end of the day. That was precious. estory
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from royowen
I like the principle of Evil me and just Me! I think you've hit on something here dear Iza, we are all in the two faced variety, with two personalities, great job here my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Typo I hope (is) not the Landlord. Its?
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I like the principle of Evil me and just Me! I think you've hit on something here dear Iza, we are all in the two faced variety, with two personalities, great job here my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Typo I hope (is) not the Landlord. Its?
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I love your word play and your tongue-in-cheek humor. Your allusive phrases will draw the reader in. Your approach is clever. The reader will be trying to second guess what will happen. Those who have watched tv and movies may know how the plot will twist with this new laundering operation.
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I love your word play and your tongue-in-cheek humor. Your allusive phrases will draw the reader in. Your approach is clever. The reader will be trying to second guess what will happen. Those who have watched tv and movies may know how the plot will twist with this new laundering operation.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Eddy Fidelis
Intriguingly funny. This line is hilarious, it got me laughing hard. "Whatever the client ask I have to say: certainly we can do that." That feeling when your mistake break you and you try to do everything to mend it or avoid a repetition.
Great job there. Best of luck
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Intriguingly funny. This line is hilarious, it got me laughing hard. "Whatever the client ask I have to say: certainly we can do that." That feeling when your mistake break you and you try to do everything to mend it or avoid a repetition.
Great job there. Best of luck
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Me, being me is wondering if they are laundering money.???? Oh well, maybe he'll be good at it. LOL
Me: Oh, my I wonder what kind of laundry they are "they dry cleaning." (may??)
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Me, being me is wondering if they are laundering money.???? Oh well, maybe he'll be good at it. LOL
Me: Oh, my I wonder what kind of laundry they are "they dry cleaning." (may??)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Well, seems EvilMe learned a lot on his first day and even used the experience to get hired by the competition!
Comments:
Me: Where those treats for the customers? (Were)
I didn't understand: "they dry cleaning."
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Well, seems EvilMe learned a lot on his first day and even used the experience to get hired by the competition!
Comments:
Me: Where those treats for the customers? (Were)
I didn't understand: "they dry cleaning."
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
