She
Found a perfect mate.77 total reviews
Comment from greyson ernst
this is a really nice contest entry and you won my vote so for i have no suggestions and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
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this is a really nice contest entry and you won my vote so for i have no suggestions and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This seems to be a sincere poetry about finding a mate for love and you have achieved it.
I sincerely wish your love will last for the rest your life and hers.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
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This seems to be a sincere poetry about finding a mate for love and you have achieved it.
I sincerely wish your love will last for the rest your life and hers.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'She', is a well-written and delightfully heart-warming piece. It was a pleasure to read this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
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'She', is a well-written and delightfully heart-warming piece. It was a pleasure to read this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely Love Poem meeting the requirements of the prompt perfectly. The artwork is fitting the piece.
Very nicely done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
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A lovely Love Poem meeting the requirements of the prompt perfectly. The artwork is fitting the piece.
Very nicely done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
This is surely a love poem without any of the usual trappings. I had
not read the author's notes so I was not aware of the limitations set
upon you as a writer. Good luck in the contest. I really like the picture
you selected to enhance your writing, too!
Rdfrdmom2
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This is surely a love poem without any of the usual trappings. I had
not read the author's notes so I was not aware of the limitations set
upon you as a writer. Good luck in the contest. I really like the picture
you selected to enhance your writing, too!
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This entry for the love poem demonstrated love that is the almighty force to keep one whole. You followed the guidelines nicely with a positive message. Also, a perfect picture to accompany the words was chosen. I enjoyed this entry very much.
Blessings,
brigitte
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This entry for the love poem demonstrated love that is the almighty force to keep one whole. You followed the guidelines nicely with a positive message. Also, a perfect picture to accompany the words was chosen. I enjoyed this entry very much.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Biographical Poetry meeting the required norms, having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting VEILED LOVE as has been desired.
"she entered into my life ..." Here 'she' should be 'She'. It's my opinion.
Laudable Attempt!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Biographical Poetry meeting the required norms, having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting VEILED LOVE as has been desired.
"she entered into my life ..." Here 'she' should be 'She'. It's my opinion.
Laudable Attempt!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Raul1
A very good description without telling of the words not provided. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
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A very good description without telling of the words not provided. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the title: "She." It is a blessing to find somewhat who can be such a passionate partner as what the poem says: "... offered cushion if I fell, touched me, grew to know me well, will never find another who makes my senses flutter."
A good poem to express what a good partner can be.
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I like the title: "She." It is a blessing to find somewhat who can be such a passionate partner as what the poem says: "... offered cushion if I fell, touched me, grew to know me well, will never find another who makes my senses flutter."
A good poem to express what a good partner can be.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
She sounds perfect, and your poem is written following the guidelines exactly. I especially like the lines, "touched me, grew to know me well...will never find another who makes my senses flutter. Very creatively written. Best wishes in the contest.
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She sounds perfect, and your poem is written following the guidelines exactly. I especially like the lines, "touched me, grew to know me well...will never find another who makes my senses flutter. Very creatively written. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
