She
Found a perfect mate.77 total reviews
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a short and sweet little poem. The picture adds muchto the romantic atmosphere. The words are simple but they convey a consistent message of true love.
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This is a short and sweet little poem. The picture adds muchto the romantic atmosphere. The words are simple but they convey a consistent message of true love.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
Comment from estory
I liked how this piece captured that moment when the touch of a lover can make you come to life. The brightening glance, so to speak, the racing heart, that the touch can ignite. estory
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I liked how this piece captured that moment when the touch of a lover can make you come to life. The brightening glance, so to speak, the racing heart, that the touch can ignite. estory
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
Comment from Ben Colder
I was thinking of the first time I saw the girl of my dreams who later became my wife for 57 years. The poet knew what to say to make my old heart strings hum again. Best wishes in the contest.
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I was thinking of the first time I saw the girl of my dreams who later became my wife for 57 years. The poet knew what to say to make my old heart strings hum again. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
She must be a rare soul, soul with kind eyes, a vintage heart, and a beautiful mind. This is what I imagine as I read your beautiful line. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
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She must be a rare soul, soul with kind eyes, a vintage heart, and a beautiful mind. This is what I imagine as I read your beautiful line. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
Comment from Wendy G
This is a beautiful poem of love, highlighting those qualities which offer support, tenderness and comfort. There is a gentle suggestion of sensuality and desire, which is appropriately subtle, for this contest. Good wishes.
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This is a beautiful poem of love, highlighting those qualities which offer support, tenderness and comfort. There is a gentle suggestion of sensuality and desire, which is appropriately subtle, for this contest. Good wishes.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we find that one person who we connect with, then our soul is nurtured and our senses are flutter with delight, a fine tribute to your romance here, love Dolly x
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When we find that one person who we connect with, then our soul is nurtured and our senses are flutter with delight, a fine tribute to your romance here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
Comment from nomi338
Fortunate is the man who finds love. Wise is the man who upon finding love, does all that he can to safeguard and secure that love for the benefit of himself and all the possible offspring that may come about as a result of that love.
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Fortunate is the man who finds love. Wise is the man who upon finding love, does all that he can to safeguard and secure that love for the benefit of himself and all the possible offspring that may come about as a result of that love.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from DonandVicki
This is the kind of SHE that all men strive to find. You depicted this very well in your well chosen poetic phrases. The pencil drawing has complemented your work well. Don
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This is the kind of SHE that all men strive to find. You depicted this very well in your well chosen poetic phrases. The pencil drawing has complemented your work well. Don
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely and elegant--heartfelt sentiments, simply stated--no obscure metaphor--for which I thank you! Whimsical bit with cushion--Jaunty closing touch with "flutter."
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Lovely and elegant--heartfelt sentiments, simply stated--no obscure metaphor--for which I thank you! Whimsical bit with cushion--Jaunty closing touch with "flutter."
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
Hello, I think that you wrote a beautiful poem! It is very creative. I can relate to it because I know how it feels to be in love. My favorite line is "she lifted me up, freed me allowed me to clearly see offered cushion if I fell" There is nothing like a partner building you up. This is a great poem and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Hello, I think that you wrote a beautiful poem! It is very creative. I can relate to it because I know how it feels to be in love. My favorite line is "she lifted me up, freed me allowed me to clearly see offered cushion if I fell" There is nothing like a partner building you up. This is a great poem and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
