She
Found a perfect mate.77 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
The "She" over you poem showed pure love and so this is a perfect topic for a love poem. I especially liked that she "offered a cushion" to protect falls. Best wishes in the contest!
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The "She" over you poem showed pure love and so this is a perfect topic for a love poem. I especially liked that she "offered a cushion" to protect falls. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Roberta Liszcz
Very sweet description of how it feels to love someone truly. Worded innocently but you can feel the passion underlying. Well done. Good luckin the contest.
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Very sweet description of how it feels to love someone truly. Worded innocently but you can feel the passion underlying. Well done. Good luckin the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from RetroStarfish
This is a great contest entry and a nice poem. I like that you have outlined a progression of love: "...touched me, grew to know me well..."
Nicely done.
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This is a great contest entry and a nice poem. I like that you have outlined a progression of love: "...touched me, grew to know me well..."
Nicely done.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Omar sb
Simple yet very concise!
"Offered cushion if I fell, touched me, grew to know me well."
That's speaks volumes in just a few words.
Nice work!
You also clearly followed the guidelines.
Good luck in the contest!
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Simple yet very concise!
"Offered cushion if I fell, touched me, grew to know me well."
That's speaks volumes in just a few words.
Nice work!
You also clearly followed the guidelines.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have done well in writing a love poem without using those words that are usually associated with one. I like the lines: "she lifted me up, freed me allowed me to clearly see." Hope you do well in the contest.
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You have done well in writing a love poem without using those words that are usually associated with one. I like the lines: "she lifted me up, freed me allowed me to clearly see." Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
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You are welcome
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author of a beautiful poem.
Your love Not using the words love, kiss, romance, soul,heart,boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.
Meets all the don't do(s)
I read this part an could feel from your words of why you love your soulmate----
if I fell
touched me, grew to know me well
will never find another
who makes my senses flutter
Best to you in this romance contest
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Hello unknown author of a beautiful poem.
Your love Not using the words love, kiss, romance, soul,heart,boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.
Meets all the don't do(s)
I read this part an could feel from your words of why you love your soulmate----
if I fell
touched me, grew to know me well
will never find another
who makes my senses flutter
Best to you in this romance contest
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Hi, I really like this! Perhaps the first two lines should be switched, though, because the ways it's written, it almost sounds like you became surrounded by strife once she entered your life. But the opposite is true, yes?
So maybe something like this instead?
I was surrounded by strife
then she entered my life
Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Hi, I really like this! Perhaps the first two lines should be switched, though, because the ways it's written, it almost sounds like you became surrounded by strife once she entered your life. But the opposite is true, yes?
So maybe something like this instead?
I was surrounded by strife
then she entered my life
Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, This is the kind of love poem I like to read.
The kind of love poem that focuses on what that love did to change your life. You did it one better, when you described how she has sustained that love for many years it seems. You are a very lucky man.
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Dear Author, This is the kind of love poem I like to read.
The kind of love poem that focuses on what that love did to change your life. You did it one better, when you described how she has sustained that love for many years it seems. You are a very lucky man.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, that was really lovely. To write a love poem like that to the one you love most of all, must be amazing. You used those words perfectly, all of them, and what a lovely poem you created from them. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
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Aww, that was really lovely. To write a love poem like that to the one you love most of all, must be amazing. You used those words perfectly, all of them, and what a lovely poem you created from them. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Found a perfect mate.
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Great entry for the Love Poem writing prompt contest. You didn't use the words
love, kiss, romance, soul,heart,boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.
Good luck in the contest
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Found a perfect mate.
She
Great entry for the Love Poem writing prompt contest. You didn't use the words
love, kiss, romance, soul,heart,boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
