Meant to Be
Two strangers who were...9 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
A nicely penned love story and you set the scene very well and give your characters life through the thoughts in your words Welldone good luck in the contesr Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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A nicely penned love story and you set the scene very well and give your characters life through the thoughts in your words Welldone good luck in the contesr Cheers Christine
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, it's much appreciated. :)
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Congratulation on your win .Cheers Christine
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Good entry for the Love Poem writing prompt contest. You followed the rules...wrote a love poem without using the words love, kiss, romance, soul,heart, boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.
Very romantic...."Now through the park we both walk hand in hand,
nothing exists except for him and me."
Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Good entry for the Love Poem writing prompt contest. You followed the rules...wrote a love poem without using the words love, kiss, romance, soul,heart, boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.
Very romantic...."Now through the park we both walk hand in hand,
nothing exists except for him and me."
Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful love poem - and yes, sometimes it does happen just like that! Your poem is well written, and flows smoothly, with an unforced rhyme scheme. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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A beautiful love poem - and yes, sometimes it does happen just like that! Your poem is well written, and flows smoothly, with an unforced rhyme scheme. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Omar sb
A truly sizzling sensational love poem!
Especially given the writing prompt restrictions.
You captured me from the 1stanza.
What a wonderfully written poetic passage about two crossing souls.
Please keep creating more literary works.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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A truly sizzling sensational love poem!
Especially given the writing prompt restrictions.
You captured me from the 1stanza.
What a wonderfully written poetic passage about two crossing souls.
Please keep creating more literary works.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for taking time to read my poem and for this stellar review...it made my night. :)
Comment from equestrik
You chose a lovely picture to go with your writing. This is a good write for the contest. It is creatively written and surely does speak of love. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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You chose a lovely picture to go with your writing. This is a good write for the contest. It is creatively written and surely does speak of love. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, it's not easy to not use the word love in a love poem..lol I appreciate you reading my poem and for this great review.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I believe in: "Everything is meant to be." Unlike in Asia, marriages can be arranged, otherwise, they will be like "meant to be" just like this poem.
It is a poem of romance. I like the picture too.
Happy writing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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I believe in: "Everything is meant to be." Unlike in Asia, marriages can be arranged, otherwise, they will be like "meant to be" just like this poem.
It is a poem of romance. I like the picture too.
Happy writing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate you reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Marvelous poem that conveys much love without using may words and are well known for love. Delightful poem deserving of a six star rating!!!! Also love the picture you choose!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Marvelous poem that conveys much love without using may words and are well known for love. Delightful poem deserving of a six star rating!!!! Also love the picture you choose!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you, you are so kind to vote for me. I love the 6 stars. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Leigh Lawhon
Really nice rhyming scheme and it flows well, capturing a magical moment in time. It does, however, make me wonder what was said to connect the two people.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Really nice rhyming scheme and it flows well, capturing a magical moment in time. It does, however, make me wonder what was said to connect the two people.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Sometimes words aren't necessary....I fell in love with my husband the first time I saw him. Before he even opened his mouth. Thanks for this nice review. :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I love the scene you have evoked for the reader. A chance meeting that leads to so much more. *smile* You have done a great job of presenting this romance without using any of those forbidden words, too.
I do wish your lines had been a bit more even, and the meter a bit less bumpy.
Also:
--> Two stranger(s) who were...
And I LOVE that image!
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I love the scene you have evoked for the reader. A chance meeting that leads to so much more. *smile* You have done a great job of presenting this romance without using any of those forbidden words, too.
I do wish your lines had been a bit more even, and the meter a bit less bumpy.
Also:
--> Two stranger(s) who were...
And I LOVE that image!
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and for pointing out my error. I've never really paid much attention to meter, I'll have to work on that.:) Thanks again.
