Debris
Poem 5/7/52 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This poem meets the requirement of 5-7-5 poetry poem.
The picture looks nice but suggest to include some debris as the poem reads: "As light of new dawn breaks, debris from yesterday's wild storm still lingers." Wild storm may not clear a place. What it needs is our behavior of keeping all public places clean.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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This poem meets the requirement of 5-7-5 poetry poem.
The picture looks nice but suggest to include some debris as the poem reads: "As light of new dawn breaks, debris from yesterday's wild storm still lingers." Wild storm may not clear a place. What it needs is our behavior of keeping all public places clean.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form, zanya. Your lines read well with great imagery. I like the image choice--just enough there to let readers imagine your words.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Your contest entry is in good form, zanya. Your lines read well with great imagery. I like the image choice--just enough there to let readers imagine your words.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya