A New Race?
We shouldn't go creating trouble.3 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
Great writing my friend! I really enjoyed the storyline... vampires, Special Ops, scientists... bloody battle scenes... all right down my alley! :)
Is this a short story or something you will continue? You did a great job with your action scenes, and the enteractions with the characters.
Keep them coming!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Great writing my friend! I really enjoyed the storyline... vampires, Special Ops, scientists... bloody battle scenes... all right down my alley! :)
Is this a short story or something you will continue? You did a great job with your action scenes, and the enteractions with the characters.
Keep them coming!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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I didn't mention it in my reply to your message, but your writing inspired me. Thank you ever so much!
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Oh wow! That's so awesome. Thanks for telling me. No one has ever said that. You made my day. Keep up the writing. I will definitely read your stories, especially if they have supernatural creatures in them. :)
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I've gotsome ideas along other lines I hope tp develope into a book length feature, but for now I will be working on developing the second short story based on some of the characters in this piece.If I work it right I may make it into a series of threeFaye
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Sounds great! Best of luck! :)
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I have started on formulating the next story line. I don't expect to be able to compete with yours, but I thought I would make an effort to expand on my writing anyway. Thanks for the encouragement.
Hugs,
Faye
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, very intense story, I wish to see a continuation. So no hope for humanity....that is going to be a terminated by vampires. Thank ð??? for sharing and good luck with your writings
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Wow, very intense story, I wish to see a continuation. So no hope for humanity....that is going to be a terminated by vampires. Thank ð??? for sharing and good luck with your writings
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your review and comments. I have an idea for a second story using some of these characters. It does need further development though.
Comment from Sally Law
Aaaahhhhh! You and Diana Crawford. My goodness. I barely made it to the end! My idea of horror was the 2021 election. This is truly horror, and scared me to death. Great job, dearest. I see a winner here. Slam dunk!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally XOs....xo.....
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Aaaahhhhh! You and Diana Crawford. My goodness. I barely made it to the end! My idea of horror was the 2021 election. This is truly horror, and scared me to death. Great job, dearest. I see a winner here. Slam dunk!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally XOs....xo.....
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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You're right, though, the 2021 election was a true horror. I greatly appreciate your review and comments.
