Comment from Lulube

Needs Improvement

another confusing post

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

You've been looking at my work for years now all of a sudden you give me poor reviews?
Give me no choice but to block you

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I am sorry for your loss. I lost my younger brother last year. This poem makes my eyes wet.

The sentence that touches me the most is:
"Sometimes things just don't work out the way it should be."

Life has ups and downs. What you said is very true.

Healthy and Happy 2021.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Losses are hard and they're also tests.
And during these tests are loved ones want us to pass them.
And continue to live in honor them...
For they are always here within our hearts!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

You have done a good job using literary techniques. I absolutely love your expression "casket of hate." How powerful. It becomes a strong cautionary tale. Your use of metaphors creates to the tone of your poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks Liz for your fine review and time.
Doctor Ricky 1024