When Will it Be My Turn?
Funny/Nonsense poem Contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Anissha Blackwell1
Bravo! "When Will It Be My Turn" is a creative masterwork. You spoke about a subject so relatable. And the way you creatively put your thoughts in a funny poem is truly on point. So let's hang in there as there's is something much we can learn. However, whether we'll ever win first place without going broke remains to be seen. Keep writing and we'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Bravo! "When Will It Be My Turn" is a creative masterwork. You spoke about a subject so relatable. And the way you creatively put your thoughts in a funny poem is truly on point. So let's hang in there as there's is something much we can learn. However, whether we'll ever win first place without going broke remains to be seen. Keep writing and we'll keep reading.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you! I'm glad you found some humor in my poem. I appreciate your encouragement and your comments. And thank you so much for the six star rating. That was a nice surprise to wake up to. Hugs.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Congratulations on your persistence. This poem voices the query of many readers if they are writers and if they enter contests. Or may be looking through their hard-working ego to who what will give rave reviews. This is a good topic.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Congratulations on your persistence. This poem voices the query of many readers if they are writers and if they enter contests. Or may be looking through their hard-working ego to who what will give rave reviews. This is a good topic.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words and for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate it. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a good contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the POV of the child. S/he tries so hard but still come out behind. I like the 'talking turds.' Your lines flow smooth with good imagery.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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This is a good contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the POV of the child. S/he tries so hard but still come out behind. I like the 'talking turds.' Your lines flow smooth with good imagery.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comments and that you took the time to review my work.
Comment from lancellot
This is a funny plea. If it was real, I would say, write about grandkids, endless love (without sex). Elderly relationships (without sex). Babies, anything set thirty or more years in the past. Dramas where the victim is a woman, a child, or an ethic minority. (You know who the bad person must be). Oh, it's always better if they are called non-fiction (and no sex or nudity).
There now you know the not so secret, secret.
Or just avoid the contests and save on funny money.
Good entry.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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This is a funny plea. If it was real, I would say, write about grandkids, endless love (without sex). Elderly relationships (without sex). Babies, anything set thirty or more years in the past. Dramas where the victim is a woman, a child, or an ethic minority. (You know who the bad person must be). Oh, it's always better if they are called non-fiction (and no sex or nudity).
There now you know the not so secret, secret.
Or just avoid the contests and save on funny money.
Good entry.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my entry. Also, thank you for the topic tips! "No sex." Got it. :-)
