Justice
Only one true means of justice?4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like switching words and phrases around. It gives new meaning and inspires continued thinking. The pedophile's smile is vile. The vile must die. The smile must die. The pedophile is already dead inside. The dead souled smile is vile.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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I like switching words and phrases around. It gives new meaning and inspires continued thinking. The pedophile's smile is vile. The vile must die. The smile must die. The pedophile is already dead inside. The dead souled smile is vile.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Yes! I like to do that too! I put the words in this particular order so that people could interpret the poem in a couple different ways. Thanks for the review. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The poem meets the contest retirement.
"Vile.
Death for the pedophile!
Smile."
These people have some mental issues. They need help.
Happy writing and Happy 2021.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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The poem meets the contest retirement.
"Vile.
Death for the pedophile!
Smile."
These people have some mental issues. They need help.
Happy writing and Happy 2021.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Yes, they do. Thank you for your review and your comments. Hugs.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three good rhymes and correct syllables.
A theme all can relate to.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three good rhymes and correct syllables.
A theme all can relate to.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your review and your rating. Hugs.
Comment from LJbutterfly
As my brain moved along with each individual word of your poem, I got to the word pedophile and was saddened. When I read, "Smile," it brought a chuckle. The wording in this piece brought both horror and humor. Very creative. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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As my brain moved along with each individual word of your poem, I got to the word pedophile and was saddened. When I read, "Smile," it brought a chuckle. The wording in this piece brought both horror and humor. Very creative. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your review. Hugs and blessings.
