Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Avery good imaginary poem. I like all the imaginations and am sure all children will like them too.

I like the picture. It is real. You know hat I mean. Reading in the loo.

I like the ending... "As consolation Mum has bought me
A little yellow canary, It is something I can feel and touch
Which means Beeda was imaginary." You got pet.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

Oh this is so cute and I think excellent for the children's rhyme poem. The picture was captivating and your poem told an adorable story. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A delightful poetic description of that 'imaginary' friend in a little child's world and their dawning realisation as that 'friend' gradually fades away from their world

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. The poem is actually about an imaginary friend my brother had. I sometimes wonder whether it did fade away!!

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Good entry for the contest. Rhymes well and easy and fun to read. It is quite common for children to have an imaginary friend at some point in their lives, but usually outgrow it.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by Anne Johnston on 18-Jan-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A cute poem. When we were little my brother had an imaginary friend. There was a friendly lion (that was his name and for some reason, he lived in the basement.) Whenever he got in trouble he would blame it on his invisible friends, Pixie and Dixie. Children are so cute with their imaginary friends.
Patty

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021

This poem is actually about the imaginary friend my brother had who lived in the toilet.

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

Hi mystery write

I have given you four stars because you have not followed the rules: your poem should rhyme.
Saying that your poem is imaginative and beautifully worded.
If you change it let me know and I would be happy to have another look.
Take care, Pete

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thanks for your comments. I think you'll find the poem has an ABCB rhyme scheme

reply by Bloomer Burbs on 16-Jan-2021

If that is the case then my ignorant other needs to say sorry: sorry.
Will change the rating.
Doh is me

Comment from roof35

Excellent

I think children would like this poem. I can visualize my grandson listening to it with a smile. It is well written, well rhymed, and just very well done.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. The poem is actually based on truth, my brother apparently had an imaginary friend named Beeda who did live in the toilet.