Silly-Walk
Nonsense9 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of literary techniques makes this poem more amusing. Your use of juxtaposition will draw the reader in. Your animated imagery entertains the reader. Alliteration and allusion will compel the reader to hunt for definitions. This entire poem is an important metaphor...not so silly after all. Well planned out.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Your use of literary techniques makes this poem more amusing. Your use of juxtaposition will draw the reader in. Your animated imagery entertains the reader. Alliteration and allusion will compel the reader to hunt for definitions. This entire poem is an important metaphor...not so silly after all. Well planned out.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you for enjoying my poem and also for expanding my vocabulary. I had to Google juxtaposition!!
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lol
Comment from Wendy G
A fun and humorous piece. Very lighthearted and well written. I enjoyed it a lot, and hope we haven't lost the urge to be silly sometimes! Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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A fun and humorous piece. Very lighthearted and well written. I enjoyed it a lot, and hope we haven't lost the urge to be silly sometimes! Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from equestrik
This is a very fun and creative presentation for the contest. This surely made me chucle. :) It is with fun that I remember the monte python silly walks.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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This is a very fun and creative presentation for the contest. This surely made me chucle. :) It is with fun that I remember the monte python silly walks.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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I grew up watching Monty Python. Ministry of Silly Walks is one of my favourite skits.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute poem and an interesting story in how a town is born:ladies and gentlemen welcome to the silly land: "There came a decision with rapid precision
It was one that people would not scorn
Because people walked strange, the place had a name change
The town of "Silly-Walk" was then born". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Cute poem and an interesting story in how a town is born:ladies and gentlemen welcome to the silly land: "There came a decision with rapid precision
It was one that people would not scorn
Because people walked strange, the place had a name change
The town of "Silly-Walk" was then born". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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A town has to have reason for its name. Thanks for reading my poem.
Comment from Sole Searcher
Funny the first time I read the silly walk and started picturing it out in my head. But as I read the piece I felt the feeling of being free and just happy. It made me smile today. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Funny the first time I read the silly walk and started picturing it out in my head. But as I read the piece I felt the feeling of being free and just happy. It made me smile today. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
I am giving this a six because of the combination of the poem with the moving image, which really sets it off. It fills the bill as a contest entry and it is quite original.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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I am giving this a six because of the combination of the poem with the moving image, which really sets it off. It fills the bill as a contest entry and it is quite original.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review and the six stars. Both are appreciated.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the video. It is funny and matches the poem. It certainly meets the requirement of the contest. Good luck to your contest.
I like the ending sentence: "Because people walked strange, the place had a name change, The town of "Silly-Walk" was then born." It is humorous to have such a name.
Good writing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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I like the video. It is funny and matches the poem. It certainly meets the requirement of the contest. Good luck to your contest.
I like the ending sentence: "Because people walked strange, the place had a name change, The town of "Silly-Walk" was then born." It is humorous to have such a name.
Good writing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
You did a Good job with your silly poem. A young man named billy liked to walk silly. Two back and then forward again. This is well put together ð???good luck in the contest. You've chosen a great video to go with your words.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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You did a Good job with your silly poem. A young man named billy liked to walk silly. Two back and then forward again. This is well put together ð???good luck in the contest. You've chosen a great video to go with your words.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Gypsy, is that you? I thought of you because of the picture, it is so you. You are right that is a very silly poem, but I liked it, so that's my review. If you are not Gypsy please excuse a silly fellow poet.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Gypsy, is that you? I thought of you because of the picture, it is so you. You are right that is a very silly poem, but I liked it, so that's my review. If you are not Gypsy please excuse a silly fellow poet.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Not Gypsy but I will take your mistake as a compliment.
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Okay then:):):):):):)
