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2 total reviews
Comment from roof35
I enjoyed this up until the last line. But I am an old lady so others might like that line. You might want to check out where you have question marks--it doesn't seem like they are always questions. You make some interesting observations. Your picture pairs well with our words.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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I enjoyed this up until the last line. But I am an old lady so others might like that line. You might want to check out where you have question marks--it doesn't seem like they are always questions. You make some interesting observations. Your picture pairs well with our words.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your fine review and time.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from irishauthorme
Hey Doc, enjoyed your unusual format, you illustrated the winter cold very well! Live in Wyoming, so can relate. Liked the last lines, "I see icicles growing from my nose!" and "It's colder than my ex-girlfriend Nancy's tit!"
Which posed a question; she only had one tit?
Cheers, irish
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Hey Doc, enjoyed your unusual format, you illustrated the winter cold very well! Live in Wyoming, so can relate. Liked the last lines, "I see icicles growing from my nose!" and "It's colder than my ex-girlfriend Nancy's tit!"
Which posed a question; she only had one tit?
Cheers, irish
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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The ones hit thing?
Is I'm trying to forget about her!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024